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Busy as a Bee

The saying “Busy as a Bee” falls on the ear pleasantly whereas “Busy as an Ant” does not, and slightly jars much as a musical piece ends unresolved, the listener left hanging. And is contrary to the ant’s well known work ethic. For not only is it an eyesore but, worse, an earsore.

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Date: 11/1/2022 6:13:00 AM
Aw. Poor little ants catch a bad rap. LOL
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 11/1/2022 6:40:00 AM
It's not the ant's fault, it's the dumb writer's! Symmetrical alliteration requires prethinking. Many thanks for reading me, Linda. / Maurice