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Dear You
Please read this letter
In the spirit it was sent
You know I really love you
But every word is meant

I love everything about you
You just need a tweak or two
If you could make these changes
You would be a better you

You look great already, but
You'd be perfect to me
If you would just submit to some
Cosmetic surgery

And look at what you're wearing
You know I love your style
But if you let me choose your clothes
You'll improve by a mile

Don't ever think I'd criticise
How you perform in bed
I had the perfect lover
But, hey, I chose you instead

So, as I said, you're perfect
I would hate it if you changed
But still, you'd be a better man
If these tweaks were arranged

With Love
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AN - John Crowe and I chose Better Man as a title and each wrote a poem. Please visit John and take a look at his version :)

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