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Best Comfort From the Sick Bay

Every sight of this angel takes his thoughts back the nurse’s suit to half way her legs sweeps his lustful track. In his fantasy, she plays the role of a wife surrounded by gadgets yet cares not about his life. On duty, she gives instructions, his attention ignores to her waist on every bend over, her stadiums cause thick sweats like paste. Routine touches from her puts him in a heavenly zone a goddess, a princess, a hottie and an incredible Amazon. Such smiles showcasing her white teeth is heart borne germinates in the inside to produce more like corn. She’s single, her ring-less finger surely cannot deceive stealing a kiss during a check-up he wants to achieve. His sweet words, she perceives as a soft test responses from her laughter like a soft baby cry is his best. He’s next in line cos she’s with another who’s nearby stealing a quick peck causes her first irritated sigh. Gently smiles at him in hilarious pity but meanwhile his advances for a while are well recorded in a file. She appreciates his manliness and ability to be bold ‘but my husband is your surgeon, this you’ve been told’.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/4/2021 3:56:00 AM
Creative lines you have penned in this one. Way to go. Surprise endings always add such a good touch to a poem. Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/5/2021 7:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara..
Date: 8/2/2021 10:35:00 AM
What a brilliant site! Plus creative idea of submission of poems online! I love it.
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/3/2021 8:47:00 AM
Yes Sabeen... You seem new here. You will love this site if you love poetry. Bless you brother.
Date: 7/31/2021 8:41:00 PM
What a funny story all told in this poem! I like the twist at the end.
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/3/2021 8:46:00 AM
Hello my lovely friend. How are you? I am happy you love the story.
Date: 7/26/2021 3:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this, exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Beata
Date: 7/23/2021 12:19:00 AM
I'm sure I can't write anything so creative. Brilliant telling... God bless you and much love, Gina
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 7:59:00 AM
Amen Regina.. I am sure you can, maybe you just don't know it yet. Good luck in attempting my contest
Date: 7/22/2021 9:47:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful and funny write. Love It. The ending gave me a laugh. Thanks, I needed it. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:00:00 AM
Hahahaha.... I am happy you had fun reading it. Have a blessed day too Paula and thank you so much for your comment.
Date: 7/22/2021 9:07:00 AM
Funom, funny tale in couplet, and a great example for your contest, lets see if I can give my couplets a twist ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much for your sweet words. I am sure you will do great in my contest. Good luck my dear friend.
Date: 3/6/2017 10:26:00 PM
Hilarious!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:01:00 AM
hahahaha.. I am glad you got the joke. I apologize for the 4 year late reply Afzal.
Date: 9/22/2016 4:56:00 AM
Lol! What a great and enjoyable piece..........A.M.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:02:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging comment Afolabi.. I apologize for the 5-year late reply.
Date: 9/15/2016 9:44:00 AM
Your experience is well fabricated as a poem. Enjoyed...........//:)hugs
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:02:00 AM
Oh dear Manmath... You are far too kind with your words. I apologize for the 5-year late reply.
Date: 9/13/2016 4:24:00 PM
I just love this piece in every way. A fav for me my friend.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Maurice. I apologize for the 5-year late reply, please do have a blessed day.
Date: 9/11/2016 7:31:00 PM
Well expressed Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:03:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I apologize for the 5-year late reply. Have a blessed day.
Date: 8/25/2016 7:36:00 PM
hahaha, The last line REALLY is fitting. It just ends it on the greatest note, Funom. Wonderful humor this.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:04:00 AM
hahahahaha.. I am glad you got the joke. Your comment is refreshing my dear Andrea. I apologize for the 5-year late reply
Date: 8/25/2016 6:05:00 PM
Nice write ! Interesting, I'm a nurse !
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:04:00 AM
Ooooh! Did you experience this? I wish you can share in your experience. Thank you so much Tanis. I apologize for the 5-year late reply.
Date: 8/24/2016 6:03:00 PM
This reminds me of working in a small community hospital on Palm Island, Australia in 1983. One night, I was trying to fix a drip on a local man my own age, when I suddenly realised I was pressing the back oh his hand against my symphysis pubis. A most erotic moment I will never forget. Poor fellow.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/28/2021 8:05:00 AM
ooh la laaaaa.... Poor fellow. Your comment is Gold. I apologize for the 5-year late reply Jean.
Date: 8/24/2016 12:59:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 6:38:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Darlene
Date: 8/24/2016 12:06:00 PM
I loved the unexpected ending Funom - a great twist to the tale:-) hugs Jan xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 6:37:00 AM
Thank you too Allison
Date: 8/24/2016 11:22:00 AM
Ha ha ha poor guy! Better he thought of getting well soon...well penned. Enjoyed. :) Sunita
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 6:37:00 AM
hahahahahaha... Thank you very much for this..

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