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At the close up cinema Premiere Contest Winner

Saturday evening in Brick Lane Air electric Two girls Barely strangers A train Like magnets spinning across the city A convoluted constellation Cryptic to a fault Lost in translation What is it about mind games that fill my thighs with particles of fire That make my stomach burn with sickening spark Yes, doctor a valid remark And as I waited for her at the close up cinema I saw myself in black and white And I thought I wish I may I wish I might

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Date: 8/12/2018 7:48:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Zara , congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
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Zara Bosman
Date: 8/13/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thanks : )
Date: 8/12/2018 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Zara Bosman
Date: 8/13/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/12/2018 10:53:00 AM
Wonderful write Zara, so happy to congratulate such talent...
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Zara Bosman
Date: 8/12/2018 1:47:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 8/12/2018 9:59:00 AM
Loved this line ... "A convoluted constellation". Congrats Zara!!! Awesome win :)
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Zara Bosman
Date: 8/12/2018 1:47:00 PM
Thank you : )
Date: 8/11/2018 9:01:00 PM
A lovely piece, Zara. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Zara Bosman
Date: 8/12/2018 2:57:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/11/2018 6:14:00 PM
Congrats. Sara
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Zara Bosman
Date: 8/12/2018 2:56:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 1/3/2018 1:52:00 AM
Wow Zara, something authentic indeed. The first lines a grabber ,what follows has meat and potatoes. The ending brilliantly conceived. I ll have to watch you now. So , does Bosman live down South? Then youre a cheeky one naming Hyde Park. Really well written. Hugs Jannie
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