Ant

moving moutains lone cresting the hill to enter a worker provides...

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 12:09:00 PM

amazing...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2010 8:17:00 PM

Sorry Rick just got your message ..I had eye surgery this morning so was not on Soup till now ..and only can be on for one hour... what is the syllable count for the Sijo anyway? I noticed your blog referred to that .. if u could let me know so I can correct for next contest...thankxxx Rick..appreciate.. by this weekend I should be able to see really well again.. and breeze by on the Soup ..haha..luv..Linda-Marie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2010 8:05:00 PM

Those ants are incredible!! this reminded me of that song, about the rubber tree plant and the little ant! Luv, andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/8/2010 7:54:00 PM

Lots of meaning to find in this little gem. Thank you Rick for your contest. It was fun and I am proud to get my hm in it. Love, Joyce

Daver Austin

Date: 6/8/2010 12:41:00 PM

Hi, Rick. "Worry is intended to be humorous." Good classical style Haiku. Love, daver

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/8/2010 5:44:00 AM

You could'nt say it in better words to secribe ants as in this Haiku, Rick! Enjoyed reading it and thank your for your kind comments and congrats!...Gert

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/7/2010 7:44:00 PM

Ill bet you saw an ant hill recently..nice little piece Rick.. dont the workers always provide for those who dont..or at least it seems that way sometimes. BG