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moving moutains lone cresting the hill to enter a worker provides...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/23/2015 12:09:00 PM
amazing...
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:17:00 PM
Sorry Rick just got your message ..I had eye surgery this morning so was not on Soup till now ..and only can be on for one hour... what is the syllable count for the Sijo anyway? I noticed your blog referred to that .. if u could let me know so I can correct for next contest...thankxxx Rick..appreciate.. by this weekend I should be able to see really well again.. and breeze by on the Soup ..haha..luv..Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:05:00 PM
Those ants are incredible!! this reminded me of that song, about the rubber tree plant and the little ant! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:54:00 PM
Lots of meaning to find in this little gem. Thank you Rick for your contest. It was fun and I am proud to get my hm in it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:41:00 PM
Hi, Rick. "Worry is intended to be humorous." Good classical style Haiku. Love, daver
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:44:00 AM
You could'nt say it in better words to secribe ants as in this Haiku, Rick! Enjoyed reading it and thank your for your kind comments and congrats!...Gert
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:44:00 PM
Ill bet you saw an ant hill recently..nice little piece Rick.. dont the workers always provide for those who dont..or at least it seems that way sometimes. BG
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:31:00 PM
Where would the world be without the manual workers? I like this description of the industrious little ant. nice one Rick...Margaret
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:58:00 PM
great workers, enjoyed reading today
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:57:00 PM
A nice haiku about what ants can do
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:12:00 PM
yes a work of art them ants are. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:05:00 PM
NICE HAIKU -IRMA
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