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African Killer

___ Aggressive cacophony swarming near the peaceful vale bite me, and send me to death come, my killer bee Fading breath, I must conceal confusing thoughts, flushed and full to gain strength, for I shall strike Vie's flesh in my site ___ A Sweetheart Contest Poet- Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Rick. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 4/15/2012 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations on a great poem.

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/15/2012 3:26:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your awesome win,, a good one!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/15/2012 1:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win Rick xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2012 11:12:00 PM

Rick, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/14/2012 8:58:00 PM

Congrats Rick! Hooray, first place! I love this dramatic write. Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 8:43:00 PM

wow, yours is mucho poetico!! congrats.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/14/2012 8:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/14/2012 8:27:00 PM

Now this one is super scary! Great job, Rick! :) Gwendolen

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/14/2012 7:47:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your well deserved win...big hugs,love deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2012 7:20:00 PM

congrats Rick on a first place win for this super entry luv..

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/6/2012 1:21:00 PM

watch out Vie revenge is comming!

Rick Parise
Date: 4/6/2012 1:45:00 PM

The Killer's have headed in to the lush vale of the states..........The amazon just a stinging memory..;-0

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/6/2012 12:39:00 PM

thankxx Rick ..u followed rules perfectly luv.. now let Vie know she has been "bitten" so she can enter and "bite" another poet.. extending happy easter blessings to u my friend..