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African Killer

___ Aggressive cacophony swarming near the peaceful vale bite me, and send me to death come, my killer bee Fading breath, I must conceal confusing thoughts, flushed and full to gain strength, for I shall strike Vie's flesh in my site ___ A Sweetheart Contest Poet- Rick Parise

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Date: 4/16/2012 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on a great poem.
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Date: 4/15/2012 3:26:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your awesome win,, a good one!!
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Date: 4/15/2012 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win Rick xx
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Date: 4/14/2012 11:12:00 PM
Rick, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:58:00 PM
Congrats Rick! Hooray, first place! I love this dramatic write. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:43:00 PM
wow, yours is mucho poetico!! congrats.
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:27:00 PM
Now this one is super scary! Great job, Rick! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations Rick on your well deserved win...big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:20:00 PM
congrats Rick on a first place win for this super entry luv..
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:21:00 PM
watch out Vie revenge is comming!
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Rick Parise
Date: 4/6/2012 1:45:00 PM
The Killer's have headed in to the lush vale of the states..........The amazon just a stinging memory..;-0
Date: 4/6/2012 12:39:00 PM
thankxx Rick ..u followed rules perfectly luv.. now let Vie know she has been "bitten" so she can enter and "bite" another poet.. extending happy easter blessings to u my friend..
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