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This is the clean version!

Trollin at the bar her leg he did touch,
She was so sexy and gorgeous and such.
  Wanna shag? Show me a sign,
  She said "your place or mine?"
Nah, forget it darlin...you talk too much!


             September 2014

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Date: 9/11/2014 6:20:00 AM
Beautifully written... thumbs up
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 9/11/2014 7:12:00 PM
Thanks Malik. Appreciate your comments!
Date: 9/10/2014 9:43:00 AM
Wonderfully funny write, Keith
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 9/10/2014 6:11:00 PM
Cheers Ram. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/10/2014 7:56:00 AM
LOL sounds like someone I'd dread to meet - great write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 9/10/2014 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Jan - this is the clean version! Not all men are princes and not all women are princesses! Lovely to hear from you.