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A Snail

spirally coiled shell crawling across the sidewalk two tiny feelers

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/27/2022 7:48:00 PM

I like the last line the best!

Bill Baker
Date: 3/28/2022 5:14:00 PM

Got to have feelers to find thing. :-) Bill

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/27/2022 12:43:00 PM

Such a vividd description of a snail well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Bill Baker
Date: 3/27/2022 5:10:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings to you too. :-) Bill

Valsa George

Date: 3/26/2022 9:20:00 PM

Oh.... I love this, Bill ! I see this snail slowly crawling away before my eyes !

Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:14:00 PM

They're going slow enough to actual see the life before them. Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/26/2022 9:04:00 PM

ooooh! Very crafty third line there, Bill. Love it! ~ Antennae Raised

Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:13:00 PM

Thanks, gw. Bill

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/26/2022 3:44:00 PM

Bill, this is adorable. Have a good evening. Blessings ~ Debra

Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:12:00 PM

Thanks, Debra. Bless you and your poetry, Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2022 9:06:00 AM

A fun/cute Haiku write. Have a blessed day/weekend...........

Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:12:00 PM

Thanks, Paula. Enjoy your weekend! Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2022 1:14:00 PM

So cute, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 10:01:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. :-)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/25/2022 7:56:00 AM

Yes !! That’s them ! I can see those feelers waving around sensing the direction with purpose ! Hugs , Susan :)

Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 8:52:00 AM

Thanks, Susan. That's what I was thinking when I wrote this one. Hugs, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/25/2022 7:43:00 AM

Great Haiku, Bill. You conveyed the scene perfectly. Blessings

Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 8:52:00 AM

Thanks, Sotto. My mind is thinking differently today. lol