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A Snail

spirally coiled shell crawling across the sidewalk two tiny feelers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 3/27/2022 7:48:00 PM
I like the last line the best!
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/28/2022 5:14:00 PM
Got to have feelers to find thing. :-) Bill
Date: 3/27/2022 12:43:00 PM
Such a vividd description of a snail well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/27/2022 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings to you too. :-) Bill
Date: 3/26/2022 9:20:00 PM
Oh.... I love this, Bill ! I see this snail slowly crawling away before my eyes !
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:14:00 PM
They're going slow enough to actual see the life before them. Bill
Date: 3/26/2022 9:04:00 PM
ooooh! Very crafty third line there, Bill. Love it! ~ Antennae Raised
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:13:00 PM
Thanks, gw. Bill
Date: 3/26/2022 3:44:00 PM
Bill, this is adorable. Have a good evening. Blessings ~ Debra
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:12:00 PM
Thanks, Debra. Bless you and your poetry, Bill
Date: 3/26/2022 9:06:00 AM
A fun/cute Haiku write. Have a blessed day/weekend...........
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:12:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Enjoy your weekend! Bill
Date: 3/25/2022 3:13:00 PM
what can I say? You're becoming a Haiku master. Seriously, well done!
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. You're to kind. :-)
Date: 3/25/2022 1:14:00 PM
So cute, Bill.
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 10:01:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. :-)
Date: 3/25/2022 7:56:00 AM
Yes !! That’s them ! I can see those feelers waving around sensing the direction with purpose ! Hugs , Susan :)
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. That's what I was thinking when I wrote this one. Hugs, Bill
Date: 3/25/2022 7:43:00 AM
Great Haiku, Bill. You conveyed the scene perfectly. Blessings
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, Sotto. My mind is thinking differently today. lol