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A Snail

spirally coiled shell crawling across the sidewalk two tiny feelers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2022 7:48:00 PM
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I like the last line the best!
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/28/2022 5:14:00 PM
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Got to have feelers to find thing. :-) Bill
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/27/2022 12:43:00 PM
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Such a vividd description of a snail well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/27/2022 5:10:00 PM
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Thank you, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings to you too. :-) Bill
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Valsa George
Date: 3/26/2022 9:20:00 PM
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Oh.... I love this, Bill ! I see this snail slowly crawling away before my eyes !
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:14:00 PM
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They're going slow enough to actual see the life before them. Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/26/2022 9:04:00 PM
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ooooh! Very crafty third line there, Bill. Love it! ~ Antennae Raised
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:13:00 PM
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Thanks, gw. Bill
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/26/2022 3:44:00 PM
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Bill, this is adorable. Have a good evening. Blessings ~ Debra
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:12:00 PM
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Thanks, Debra. Bless you and your poetry, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2022 9:06:00 AM
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A fun/cute Haiku write. Have a blessed day/weekend...........
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/26/2022 10:12:00 PM
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Thanks, Paula. Enjoy your weekend! Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 3:13:00 PM
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what can I say? You're becoming a Haiku master. Seriously, well done!
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 10:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Sara. You're to kind. :-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/25/2022 1:14:00 PM
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So cute, Bill.
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 10:01:00 PM
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Thanks, Andrea. :-)
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/25/2022 7:56:00 AM
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Yes !! That’s them ! I can see those feelers waving around sensing the direction with purpose ! Hugs , Susan :)
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 8:52:00 AM
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Thanks, Susan. That's what I was thinking when I wrote this one. Hugs, Bill
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Sotto Poet
Date: 3/25/2022 7:43:00 AM
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Great Haiku, Bill. You conveyed the scene perfectly. Blessings
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/25/2022 8:52:00 AM
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Thanks, Sotto. My mind is thinking differently today. lol

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