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Tattoo From Kalamazoo

There once was a lass from Kalamazoo Who got a large Mickey Mouse tattoo 'Twas inked on her fanny When she became a granny It sagged looking more like Winnie The Pooh Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 1 (Shared) in John Freeman's "Choose Your Own Subject And Create Your Own Category" Contest - July 2010

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2010 10:53:00 AM

Great humor in this one...Write one about this permanent make-up that women can have done now....That would be humorous...Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2010 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations to you on your win Robert in John Freeman's contest "Limerick""Choose your own subject and Create your own Category". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2010 6:48:00 PM

hahahaha. I hope you got a number one for this!!??

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/1/2010 3:21:00 PM

What an absolute hoot, Robert!...Maybe she should have just settled for a wrist tattoo (they don't sag do they?)...I can't help but picture this granny now as an eccentric, half-crazy old lady who occasionally 'moons' Winnie at a group of tight-lipped, outraged do-gooders? Congratulations, my friend - Tim

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/1/2010 12:44:00 PM

Congrats, Sarge. LOL. Great write. Have a good week. Ralphie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2010 11:36:00 AM

Congrats Bob on the Tattoo from Kalamazoo winning poem .. awesome write and perfect number one win.. happy to share the stage my friend.. happy Sunday.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/1/2010 11:32:00 AM

Oh, you have me laughing with this one, Bob. Congratulations on your win!! Very funny limerick! Love, Carolyn (I return from vacation tomorrow night)

Amy Green

Date: 8/1/2010 11:25:00 AM

NO offense what so ever! It's a funky name for a town. When I was in the Navy and told people where I was from, they thought I made the name up! LOL

John Freeman

Date: 8/1/2010 11:19:00 AM

You're a master in your own right Robert in writing the Limerick. I think I will make the Limerick my personal for contest form. Smile. What do you think? The Limerick form can be used, in such a truth revealing way. To get straight to a point in the most clear and precise revealing way. Good job on your Limerick man. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/1/2010 5:40:00 AM

Marvelus marvelous concept..BOY can I see it! LOL LIGHT & LOVE..please read my Ring A Ling! SOUPMAIL

James Fraser

Date: 8/1/2010 4:07:00 AM

Haha, You have me chuckling with this Limerick Robert. Congratulations on your win in John's fine Limerick contest >> James

Amy Green

Date: 8/1/2010 3:07:00 AM

Hey, I'm from Kalamazoo! LOL

John Freeman

Date: 7/31/2010 10:35:00 PM

Very visual Robert, Congratulations. Agape, Moses

Rick Parise

Date: 7/30/2010 7:43:00 PM

lol~very funny~enjoyed~Rick

Steven Mossburg

Date: 7/30/2010 7:22:00 PM

Funny one. Another reason I can give to my daughter to discourage her from getting one.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/30/2010 7:05:00 PM

chuckles!! Glad I gave you an idea..Good night, my friend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/30/2010 6:43:00 PM

Very good ..very funny... good luck in the contest ... I wanted to create a new category of baby lullaby limericks so decided to do the baby language thing... hope its received well.. with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/30/2010 6:15:00 PM

cute one