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This's the world of dreams and reveries Where I think ev'ry that reels, After a thousands times, would as same beliefs things besought me, Is it a mere dream?

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Date: 2/15/2013 4:10:00 PM
This is a world of dreams & reveries, where I think every man which had ( successfully) premiere the centre stage of these world (reels) for the time being and With the beliefs things which reposed in us (besought), were never in vain recapitulate.(dreams)
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Date: 1/29/2011 5:47:00 PM
interesting little poem, Kelechi, and maybe you mean leaves in line five? Yes, glutting indeed!
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:00:00 AM
How true that we dream but "things besought me" ends up as real life...its not so bad, don't you think? Julie
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:32:00 AM
well, it a funny poem both in structure and language employed
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:44:00 PM
another amazing poem,, Kelechi a world we need to wake up to and face the music. enjoyed,..
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Date: 9/16/2010 9:17:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging comment. I felt a certain connection with this piece for I too must wonder..."is it a mere dream"? in poetry, Dory
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Date: 9/7/2010 3:31:00 AM
Interesting write..."This is a world of dreams...is it a mere dream" I hope not...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 9/6/2010 2:59:00 PM
Kelechi, sometimes it is hard to separate reality from dreams. This would make a great entry for Constance's fragmented dream contest and I hope you enter it. Thanks for your kind words. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:09:00 AM
Hi Andrea so you still cant tell where am from, anywhere I am a Nigerian hope you have heard of Nigeria before if you hadn't then I ask where are you from. luv kelechi
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Date: 8/27/2010 2:16:00 PM
Hey, Kelechi, I like the theme of a world of dreams. I know it is a popular theme by some, that we all living a mere dream!! where are you from? LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:12:00 PM
A nice write Glutting, kelechi
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