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Variation on a Triolet

Blog Posted:6/13/2021 4:40:00 AM

Grandfather Clock - I have re-written this poem, reversing the last two lines in a stanza from AB to BA, giving an intersting variation to the Triolet form. The rhyming scheme is then ABaAabBA. I have also added a second stanza to give the poem more detail..

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Constance
La France

Date: 6/14/2021 9:38:00 AM

Barry, its fun to do a variation on a form, and I like this one a lot, peace _Constance

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/14/2021 12:41:00 PM

Thank you very much, Constance. // Barry

Andrea
Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2021 3:06:00 PM

I think variations like this can be very nice!!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/14/2021 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I like the way it removes the strict repetition and slightly changes the sense of the lines. // Barry

Suzette
Richards

Date: 6/13/2021 5:19:00 AM

I instinctively did this with the first triolet which I wrote years ago (no longer here on PS). Reversing the order of the last two lines, lends interest to the poem and might even put a new spin on their meaning.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/14/2021 5:45:00 AM

Thank you Suzette, I will use this variation again. // Barry

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Date Posted	PoemTitle	Form	Categories
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3/5/2024	Time	Verse	humor,light,time,
11/8/2023	Ocean	Free verse	ocean,sea,travel,wind,
9/4/2023	Stranded	Rhyme	humorous,
7/26/2023	Refuge	Rubaiyat	nature,river,
2/21/2023	Unshaded Glades	Sonnet	memory,metaphor,nostalgia
12/22/2022	The Ballad of Sandcastle Jane	Ballad	rain,sea,
12/3/2022	Jingle Bells	Light Verse	christmas,
10/31/2022	At Halloween	Villanelle	dark,halloween,
9/29/2022	Murmeration of Starlings	Terzanelle	bird,flying,
9/14/2022	Dawn Chorus	Ottava rima	bird,song,
9/1/2022	Boat Ride II	Terza Rima	environment,nature,pollut
7/20/2022	Zephyrs	Quatrain	autumn,love,seasons,summe
6/25/2022	Dragonfly	Rhyme	summer,
3/8/2022	Spring Tanka	Tanka	life,nature,spring,
2/8/2022	February	Haiku	february,seasons,snow,
1/25/2022	Egret	Senryu	bird,day,water,
1/8/2022	A Song of Spring	Sonnet	nature,song,spring,
6/13/2021	Grandfather Clock - Variation On a Triolet	Rhyme	4th grade,grandfather,gra
5/17/2021	Grandfather's Clock	Triolet	grandfather,
4/30/2021	Enchanted Wood	Villanelle	river,
2/25/2021	Joys of Spring	Haiku	seasons,spring,
12/11/2020	The Gatherer	Rhyme	christmas,fantasy,food,im
10/25/2020	A Spooky Tale	Rhyme	moon,night,
10/23/2020	Parting Ways	Rhyme	dark,nature,night,
10/19/2020	Childhood Friends	Couplet	humor,imagination,memory,
10/5/2020	The River	Rhyme	nature,river,
2/2/2020	You Came To Me	Sonnet	love,seasons,
1/25/2020	A Cat Sat On a Chair	Monorhyme	cat,humor,
1/19/2020	Obsession	Sonnet	love,passion,song,
12/31/2019	Rain	Quintain (English)	introspection,rain,weathe
12/27/2019	Thief of Thoughts	Monoku	wisdom,
12/23/2019	New Beginnings	Rispetto	birth,seasons,winter,
12/22/2019	Kissing Lips	Tanka	kiss,
12/10/2019	The Storm - a Pantoum	Pantoum	rain,storm,wind,
12/4/2019	Song Bird	Quatrain	bird,nature,
8/19/2019	Tree Haiku	Haiku	seasons,summer,tree,
8/6/2019	These Happy Hours	Free verse	nature,summer,sun,wind,
6/10/2019	Early Morning Cat	Rhyme	bird,cat,morning,
5/6/2019	Six Little Buzzy Bees	Rhyme	nature,
5/3/2019	Celebrate May With a Triolet	Triolet	may,seasons,
3/4/2019	My Pet Shark	Quatrain	humor,
2/19/2019	Spring Dances O'Er the Fields	Rhyme	seasons,spring,summer,
1/20/2019	The Greenwood - Villanelle	Villanelle	celebration,dance,fairy,f
1/6/2019	The Haunting At Darkwood Hall	Villanelle	gothic,scary,
12/16/2018	The Moon and the Snowman	Rhyme	moon,snow,song,
12/14/2018	My Cat and Zen	Monorhyme	cat,sleep,
12/2/2018	Winter Buds	Monoku	nature,tree,winter,
11/26/2018	Stone Circles At Castlerigg	Sonnet	mystery,spiritual,time,
10/29/2018	Phantom Lovers	Sonnet	longing,loss,
10/16/2018	The Wise Cheese	Rhyme	nonsense,silly,wisdom,
9/13/2018	The Nightmare of Marcus Dean	Rhyme	dream,food,humor,
8/28/2018	Autumn Quintain	Quintain (English)	autumn,change,
8/22/2018	Wind Chimes	Haiku	seasons,wind,
8/21/2018	Going To the Fair	Narrative	humor,
8/14/2018	My Reflection	Couplet	mirror,nonsense,
8/9/2018	Love Regained	Sonnet	love,romantic,
7/21/2018	Love Lost	Sonnet	absence,joy,love,romantic
7/16/2018	Nothing Happened To Me - In 1953	Couplet	age,silly,
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7/3/2018	Fidgety Cats and Feline Pets	Rhyme	cat,parody,
6/26/2018	I Have a Cat	Rhyme	cat,humor,silly,
6/23/2018	As the Eagle, Came the Wind	Rhyme	mountains,wind,
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5/15/2018	Lady of the Spring	Rispetto	joy,may,spring,
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1/6/2018	Winter Blues	Free verse	depression,winter,
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12/5/2017	Changing Seasons	Free verse	autumn,change,seasons,sum
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The Squirrel	Ballad	adventure,animal,beautifu
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Rain	Quatrain	rain,
Girl With the Pearl Earring	Rhyme	art,beauty,woman,
Food For Thought - With Chris Green	Lyric	food,health,scary,
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Simple Tones - Collaboration With Chris Green	Free verse	dance,fun,happy,
Countdown	Rhyme	betrayal,death,fear,murde
Lost In Pain	Rhyme	god,
On the Wild Side	Free verse	poems,
The Great Cheddar Cheese Robbery	Narrative	cat,funny,hilarious,snow,
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A Fabulous Beast	Rhyme	prison,strength,tiger,
Second Chance	Lyric	for him,longing,love,roma
The Elephant and the Ant	Monorhyme	allegory,animal,change,cu
What Is Love	Free verse	care,devotion,happiness,l
The Mystery of Humpty Dumpty	Rhyme	humorous,
Venus Gifts a Yarrow's Kiss	Rhyme	emotions,heartbreak,hope,
lost to autumn -	Quintain (English)	analogy,appreciation,autu
Given the Choice I Would	Rhyme	fun,
Paradise, Lost - Wwii	Sonnet	beach,beauty,hero,sad,sea
Nothing	Prose Poetry	angst,blue,character,frie
Hatred	Rhyme	change,hate,inspirational
Sundial Wisdom	Personification	appreciation,happiness,jo
Dragons In My Dreams	Pantoum	science fiction,urban,
The Bus Stop Speaks	Villanelle	humor,
Have I Ever Told You That	Free verse	humorous,poetry,word play
Find Me Somebody To Love	Rhyme	humorous,
The Melancholy Way	Villanelle	gothic,

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