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That Distant Space

That Distant Space

     Shadows slide, silent, across the cold church floor
     As pallid wraiths form in the fast fading breeze
     Where no human wanders that way anymore.
     And come to rest by the broken vestry door
     To meet in far off realms beyond our short lease
     In that abandoned place we walked before.

     A new moon rises unseen above the trees,
     Grey ghosts return on this night of dark unease
     And far from busy life’s bright domains explore
     By hidden, shaded paths that no human sees
     Where shapeless souls their earthly forms restore
     And at All Hallow’s Eve meet in dark rapport

     In that distant space where the dead convene,
     To speak apart before daylight intervenes.


     Barry Stebbings
     Oct 2024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/22/2025 12:53:00 AM
Great imagery and atmosphere created by your words here Barry. I particularly love that first line of yours and wish I'd come up with it. Cheers - Gary
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/22/2025 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Garry, much appreciated. // Barry

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