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Simple Tones - Collaboration With Chris Green

My friend,      do you see          every finger         every key          Can you hear         words to sound       float around        Do you feel           movement sing               coloring Will you take   simple tones     played alone      Making music     all your own    Listen to     melodies     in the trees   flowing softly on the breeze          Smell the air       Hum your song      to the birds       that sing along            Every giggle          every sneeze        resonates    everywhere   In your heart     smiling there Place your feet   on the floor     pirouette       evermore        In your soul       take a chance     come with me   sing and dance *** June 5, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Date: 6/7/2017 12:59:00 PM
Beautiful!! You know I love your "dancing" poems. :)
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Darren White
Date: 6/7/2017 1:06:00 PM
And this one dances, doesn't it :D Thanks my friend!
Date: 6/7/2017 8:03:00 AM
What a virtual whirlwind of music and colors your words generate . . . that is fabulous my friends. I love it when poetry leaps off the page and no only does it do so with the two of you but it is also an irresistible invitation to dance and sing along:) Amitiés
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Darren White
Date: 6/7/2017 8:07:00 AM
Yes, don't you think so? I knew you'd like this one :D It's a happy happy poem.
Date: 6/7/2017 6:03:00 AM
Hiya Darren. I love this. Honestly. It is energizing uplifting and more. Be proud. Have a wonderful afternoon. I am leaving to go back home this morning. Boo Hoo (lol)
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Darren White
Date: 6/7/2017 8:06:00 AM
Awwww, I hope you enjoyed yourself :) See you soon again my friend!
Date: 6/7/2017 5:50:00 AM
Good Afternoon Darren and Good Morning Chris. Allow me to say to you both "May all the senses be alive and well" Further, within your words and expression they are. Honestly. This is marvelous and you both make the reader feel energized. Well done in its entirety starting with a title of perfection. Have a wonderful day. You leave the readers on a grand note. Congratulations on the collaboration. To you both I say -- s m i l e --
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Darren White
Date: 6/7/2017 5:54:00 AM
Hey there Lisa, so happy you enjoy this! It is fun, isn't it? A real poem - song to smile :) And you did! Have a great day, my friend.
Date: 6/6/2017 9:20:00 PM
I love Lindsey, I listen to her all the time! This is such a delightful poem, and a great collab!
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Darren White
Date: 6/6/2017 10:45:00 PM
Yeah, I do too, it's so happy! And it was a fun collab indeed, enjoyed it.
Date: 6/6/2017 5:41:00 PM
It's so obvious music flows in your blood Darren. Just like her.
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Darren White
Date: 6/6/2017 10:44:00 PM
Thanks Jean :D
Date: 6/6/2017 4:43:00 PM
It's got rhythm, upbeat and I'm dancing along :) fabulous collab you two. I'm loving it :) :)
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Darren White
Date: 6/6/2017 10:43:00 PM
Thanks, and yeah, it has that beat indeed, it's written like that.
Date: 6/6/2017 3:26:00 AM
Beautifully done guys! Great collab!
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Darren White
Date: 6/6/2017 4:00:00 AM
Thanks Budgie :) It's great, working with Chris!
Date: 6/6/2017 3:18:00 AM
What a great collaboration Darren and Chris.The music really enhanced your lively words set to it. Who would not feel like dancing to this lively number? A great write..... Maria
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Darren White
Date: 6/6/2017 3:58:00 AM
I fully agree, it's happy, fun, and invites to dance :)
Date: 6/5/2017 6:22:00 PM
A fun write that prances over the page. Nicely done:) Amitiés
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Darren White
Date: 6/6/2017 1:16:00 AM
It does, doesn't it? Thank you :)
Date: 6/5/2017 12:54:00 PM
Sweet write you two! xomo :)
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Darren White
Date: 6/5/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, ma mo :)
Date: 6/5/2017 9:17:00 AM
made me think of Hip-hop for kids - cute
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Darren White
Date: 6/5/2017 9:33:00 AM
Fun isn't it? Just a happy poem :)
Date: 6/5/2017 8:36:00 AM
Fabulous my friends.
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Darren White
Date: 6/5/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Tim :)
Date: 6/5/2017 8:31:00 AM
Love everything about this, A brilliant collaboration !. Definitely a Fav. // Barry
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Darren White
Date: 6/5/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Barry \o/
Date: 6/5/2017 5:59:00 AM
So beautiful in form and words! Lovely, Chris and Darren!
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Darren White
Date: 6/5/2017 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Kim, it is playful, isn't it? And so is the video :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 6:00:00 AM
The video is fun and filled with much joy!
Date: 6/5/2017 1:18:00 AM
A lovely collaboration with Chris of music and dance - the video is cool too! Have a wonderful day :)
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Darren White
Date: 6/5/2017 1:32:00 AM
So happy you like it. It's a happy and fun poem, it has a very seductive rhythm to it, inviting to dance :)

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