Barry Stebbings Poet Alliteration

Santa's Silent Sled

Santa’s Silent Sled

Santa's silent sled slid slowly over the soft snow
Over the soft snow Santa's silent sled slowly slid.
If the soft snow on which Santa slid his slow sled
Melted, how would Santa slowly slide his silent sled?

           11/19/2007

For Alliteration Poetry Contest
by Joseph May

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Christuraj Alex September 3, 2022 at 1:47 AM Wow! S! Congratulations! Barry Stebbings September 3, 2022 at 3:53 AM Thank you very much, Alex. // Barry

Joseph May September 2, 2022 at 9:48 AM Congrats on your win Barry, Very nicely penned Barry Stebbings September 2, 2022 at 2:47 PM Thank you Joseph.

Linda Alice Fowler September 2, 2022 at 9:44 AM Hahahaha Barry - very clever indeed :)) Congratulations on your win! Linda Barry Stebbings September 2, 2022 at 2:46 PM Thank you, Linda

Anisha Dutta December 2, 2017 at 9:50 PM Charming. Trying o follow your example. Best Wishes Barry Stebbings December 3, 2017 at 5:19 AM Thank you very much, Anisha. // Barry

Connie Marcum Wong November 29, 2017 at 3:04 PM This is a real tongue twister Barry. A fun poem for the holidays! : ) Barry Stebbings November 30, 2017 at 1:14 PM Thank you, Connie, I have sent it to my grand daughter, 6, to try. // Barry

John Lawless November 27, 2017 at 7:18 AM Barry, have you been hanging out with that Woodchuck again???. This is more than Alliteration, it incorporates a great deal of word play and trickery.. Barry Stebbings November 27, 2017 at 1:40 PM Thank you very much, John. // Barry

Constance La France November 26, 2017 at 2:08 PM Barry, this is great, I really enjoyed your Alliteration example for your contest, hopefully I can come up with a poem worthy~ Barry Stebbings November 26, 2017 at 2:31 PM Thank you, BW, I look forward to reading it. // Barry

Jan Allison November 19, 2017 at 3:37 PM simply sensational!!!:-) hugs jan xx Barry Stebbings November 19, 2017 at 4:00 PM Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry Barry Stebbings November 19, 2017 at 4:00 PM Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry