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Santa's Silent Sled

Santa’s Silent Sled

Santa's silent sled slid slowly over the soft snow
Over the soft snow Santa's silent sled slowly slid.
If the soft snow on which Santa slid his slow sled
Melted, how would Santa slowly slide his silent sled?

           11/19/2007

For Alliteration Poetry Contest
by Joseph May

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/3/2022 1:47:00 AM

Wow! S! Congratulations!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/3/2022 3:53:00 AM

Thank you very much, Alex. // Barry

Joseph May

Date: 9/2/2022 9:48:00 AM

Congrats on your win Barry, Very nicely penned

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/2/2022 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/2/2022 9:44:00 AM

Hahahaha Barry - very clever indeed :)) Congratulations on your win! Linda

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/2/2022 2:46:00 PM

Thank you, Linda

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/2/2017 9:50:00 PM

Charming. Trying o follow your example. Best Wishes

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/3/2017 5:19:00 AM

Thank you very much, Anisha. // Barry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/29/2017 3:04:00 PM

This is a real tongue twister Barry. A fun poem for the holidays! : )

Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/30/2017 1:14:00 PM

Thank you, Connie, I have sent it to my grand daughter, 6, to try. // Barry

John Lawless

Date: 11/27/2017 7:18:00 AM

Barry, have you been hanging out with that Woodchuck again???. This is more than Alliteration, it incorporates a great deal of word play and trickery..

Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/27/2017 1:40:00 PM

Thank you very much, John. // Barry