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Ice Cream

Ice Cream Lover of the shade, Chilled fruit of the high summer. Soft petalled flower, Edible varieties Budding from a cone shaped stem. Barry Stebbings 05/30/18 Syllable count by Howmanysyllables.com

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Jean Bush

Date: 8/30/2018 1:27:00 PM

Lovely. All summer in a poem. God, you're prolific! I envy your imagination.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/30/2018 1:29:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jean. // Barry

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/5/2018 1:48:00 PM

Gorgeous tanks!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/7/2018 4:47:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. // Barry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2018 6:06:00 PM

Now THIS is good tanka (and I do not say that lightly) You rocked it, Barry.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/20/2018 10:17:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I much appreciate your comment. // Barry

Eve Roper

Date: 5/31/2018 4:29:00 PM

interesting imagery... ice cream was my dessert for lunch.. :)

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/2/2018 4:22:00 AM

Thank you Eve, I thought it would be interesting to represent ice cream as an edible summer fruit. // Barry

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/30/2018 12:27:00 PM

Lovely Barry, that took me back to my childhood, the excitement when we used to hear the music playing from his van, Happy days. Tom.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/31/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. // Barry

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/30/2018 9:46:00 AM

Lovely yummy poetry!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/30/2018 10:16:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen. // Barry

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/30/2018 10:16:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen. // Barry