Apparition

Apparition
Dark night
Bad fright
For Footle Contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Congrats - very good footle, Barry.
Barden Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 4:34 PM
Congratulations on your Footle win, Barry - blessings, friend! :-)
Stebbings Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much, Gregory. // Barry
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading your humor..I am going to write one a different form using this one as an idea..Thanks for stopping by my page..I see from your comment that you have experienced and enjoyed the light of morn's sun dancing through the colorful trees..In the afternoon when the angle is just right it is beautiful as well..Sara
Stebbings Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, Sara. Yes, I love the way the early morning light reflects off of leave and sometimes shines through them. Good luck with the poem. // Barry
Williams Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 3:43 PM
Very nicely done, Barry. Congratulations on your win!! :) Bartholomew
Stebbings Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Thank you very much, Bartholomew. // Barry
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win. I am not at the winner list, but I hope to visit them all!
Stebbings Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. // Barry.
Murray Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 11:19 AM
This is a whole story in four words. I love it.
Stebbings Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Thank you very much, Jean. // Barry
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Congrats, Barry!
Stebbings Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. // Barry
Callus Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Imagination can play funny tricks on us in the dark, Barry! Congratulations on this merited win. Regards // paul
Stebbings Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Thank you very much, Paul. // Barry
Wigley Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 6:24 AM
woooooo........ a scary win. Well done, Barry. Regards, Viv
Stebbings Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Thank you very much, Viv. // Barry.
Hagy Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Spooky write Barry :)... sounds like a night of sci-fi flicks haha :) Have great day :)
Stebbings Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 6:52 AM
Ha, ha! Thank you very much, Chris. // Barry
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 12:55 PM
WELL DONE!
Stebbings Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 5:11 AM
Thank you, Andrea. // Barry
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November 22, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Perfect potent :) xomo!
Stebbings Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 5:10 AM
Thank you, Maureen. // Barry
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 12:13 PM
funny footle Barry:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Stebbings Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 5:09 AM
Thank you, Jan. // Barry
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