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Rudolph's Stuck In Traffic

Rudolph’s Stuck in the Traffic

     Rudolph’s stuck in the traffic,
     Oh! What a to-do,
     Hooters too-too-tooting
     Rudolph’s nose turning blue.

     Christmas Eve in the township
     Oh! What a crush,
     Santa’s sled’s going nowhere,
     Commuters all in a rush.

     Santa’s directing the traffic,
     Cars going everywhere.
     Children searching for presents,
     Oh! What a cheery affair.

     A choir in the precinct,
     Singing Silent Night.
     The crowd stand around waving,
     Santa’s sled’s really stuck tight.

     Rudolph’s stuck in the traffic,
     Oh! What a to-do,
     The crowd standing round waving,
     Santa’s sled’s really stuck tight.

      11/28/17
      For Contest 'Christmas Rhymes'
        by Kim Rodrigues

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2017 8:00:00 PM

Ha, guess what the capcha was ? C4R!!! and the next one I see is RPM!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/29/2017 12:35:00 PM

Ha, ha, very appropriate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2017 7:59:00 PM

You did a GREAT job with that theme of Rudolph. Gosh was this contest ever judged?? I can't even remember. Anyway, it deserves a win!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/29/2017 12:34:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, unfortunately it did not make the grade. Never mind.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 11/30/2017 4:44:00 PM

Lol. Great imagery and rhyme, Barry. Good luck. Reads like a winner.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/1/2017 1:13:00 PM

Thank you very much, Rhoda. // Barry

Jan Allison

Date: 11/28/2017 4:52:00 PM

What a fun poem, I hope he gets out in time for the big day Barry:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/29/2017 1:01:00 PM

Ha, ha!. Thanks for the comment, Jan. // Barry

Joseph May

Date: 11/28/2017 4:01:00 PM

I enjoyed this fun write Barry...next time Santa should take the hov lane :)

Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/29/2017 1:00:00 PM

Thank you very much, Joseph. // Barry

Kevin Shaw

Date: 11/28/2017 3:56:00 PM

Good fun poem, good luck in the contest, regards, Kevin

Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/29/2017 1:00:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kevin. // Barry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/28/2017 3:48:00 PM

Very creative Barry! My granddaughter 5, kept asking me to take her to the North pole to meet the real Santa...I finally told her he is magic and if you try to see him he disappears. She was satisfied with that answer. Whew! Lol. I enjoyed your poem! : )

Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/29/2017 12:59:00 PM

Very quick thinking of you, Connie. Thanks for commenting, pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry.