Tree Haiku

a thousand seasons

     undisturbed the tree matures

     timeless summer shade


       08/19/2019

     Checked with howmanysyllables.com
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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 12:24 AM
I love this beautiful tribute to timeless trees Barry! Their shade and the oxygen they provide is symbiotic with our survival. Best wishes for a win in the contest. : ) xxoo
Stebbings Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 1:42 PM
Thank you very much, Connie. We are damaging these essential life forms at our peril. // Barry.
Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 4:29 PM
Barry, this is a lovely haiku that gives us an image of a very strong, ancient tree. Can you imagine living for a thousand years? Nicely done. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
Stebbings Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Thank you very much, Carolyn. // Barry
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Wow, this is very nice Barry. I love it :)
Stebbings Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 1:03 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi. // Barry
Cunningham Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 9:54 AM
Nice image Barry, natures timeless wonder's. Good luck. Tom
Stebbings Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 12:58 PM
Thank you very much, Tom. // Barry
Vangaveti Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 3:43 AM
A perfect write!! Good luck !!
Stebbings Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 12:57 PM
Thank you very much, Swetha. // Barry
Ashley Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Oh just beautiful, Barry. Love your last line for a wonderful finish. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Stebbings Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 3:17 AM
Thank you very much Susan.
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 5:42 PM
- A lovely haiku, Barry - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Stebbings Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 3:14 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise
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