Barry Stebbings Poet Quintain (English)

Rain

Rain

     On paths across open meadow
     I once walked in soothing rain.
     On streets where rain filled gutters flow,
     Where wetted leaves shade rain soaked lane,
     ‘Tis there I long to walk again.

         12/31/2019

     For 'Writing Prompt - English Quintain  Contest'
       By Dear Heart.

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Constance La France January 19, 2020 at 8:42 AM Barry, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this lovely poem, I love walking in the rain too _Constance Barry Stebbings January 19, 2020 at 10:05 AM Thank you very much for my win, Dear Heart. // Barry

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2020 at 2:15 PM - A great winning poem, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise Barry Stebbings January 15, 2020 at 9:09 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. // Barry

Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2020 at 4:58 AM a subtle sadness is encompassed within your words Barry. This is lovely! Congratulations on your win! xxoo Barry Stebbings January 11, 2020 at 11:41 AM Thank you Connie. // Barry

poemtheart poemtheart January 4, 2020 at 4:11 AM A good poem, very well wrote....word choice and you cleverly used them...good flow of lines....it is amazing to read.... :) Barry Stebbings January 4, 2020 at 7:35 AM Thank you very much, Muddasar. // Barry

Heidi Sands December 31, 2019 at 11:41 AM Very nice Barry. I enjoyed this :) Barry Stebbings December 31, 2019 at 12:50 PM Thank you, Heidi. // Barry

Gary Smith December 31, 2019 at 10:05 AM Excellent Quintain Barry, much enjoyed. :) Barry Stebbings December 31, 2019 at 12:50 PM Thank you, Gary. // Barry