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The Spectre

The Spectre I saw the spectre cross the hall But when I looked into that space I saw there was nothing there at all. I saw a shadow upon the stair As I stood in that haunted place And shivered in the evening air. Footsteps creaked upon the floor, With a slow and shuffling pace, The scratching of a ghostly claw. Then I felt its dreaded cold embrace And in the dusk, upon my face, Its fingers left their chilling trace. But in the mirror upon the wall I saw there was nothing there at all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/18/2017 12:35:00 PM
Whoa!! Scary with the imagination running wild or was it??..Enjoyed reading your Halloween work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/19/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Sara. It is a mystery. // Barry
Date: 10/17/2017 4:59:00 AM
Great poem Barry... spooky and eerie, and so well written :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/17/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darren. I appreciate your comment. // Barry
Date: 10/16/2017 1:48:00 PM
what creepy chilling imagery, I love the way you built up the tension Barry. thanks for sharing:-) hugs jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/16/2017 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. // Barry

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