My Slumbering Muse

My Slumbering Muse


     My slumbering Muse in her hidden dreams

     Has slept still beside me and not stirred,

     And though in shallow sleep, or so it seems,

     Has not woken and spoken a single word.

     Or, laying abed with me, not conceived

     To enlighten me with a useful rhyme.

     I ask for poetic themes to be weaved,

     But my silent Muse sleeps a long, long, time.

     How, then, do I arouse my resting Muse?

     Shall I now, gentle, wake her with a kiss,

     And whisper that her dreams hold rhymes to choose?

     And to share those dreams is poetic bliss.

     Or, annoyed, shall she wish her dreams to keep,

     Turning to one side to resume her sleep?


         10/02/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:25 PM
A lovely sonnet, Barry. Congrats on your win with this beauty.
Stebbings Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Thank you for your comment, Line, much appreciated. (I think she is still asleep!!) / Barry.
George   Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Very romantic sonnet, Barry! Congratulations on your win. Elaine Reply
Stebbings Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Thank you very much, Elaine. // Barry
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:47 AM
beautifully expressed sonnet dear Barry ;) Congrats :)-luloo
Stebbings Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. // Barry
Ashley Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Returning with congratulations, Barry for your wonderful win with your imaginative and fantastic expression of your sleeping muse.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Stebbings Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:17 AM
Thank you very much, Susan. // Barry
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:07 PM
I love the personalization in your poem Barry. My muse plays hide and seek with me lol. Very lovely! Congratulations on your win! : )
Stebbings Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:16 AM
Thank you very much, Connie. I like using personalization as an expressive medium. // Barry
Hamilton Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Congrats Barry on a nice sonnet and great placement!
Stebbings Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:13 AM
Thank you very much for my placement John. // Barry.
Haight Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Oh, those sleeping 'muses', Barry! I know the feeling. You've expressed this so well in your nice Sonnet. Congrats on your win. Sandra
Stebbings Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:08 AM
Thank you very much, Sandra. // Barry
Ashley Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 8:16 PM
A beautiful and creative write Barry. Very lovely imagery that captivated my imagination. Enjoyed!
Stebbings Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Thank you very much Susan. // Barry
Evans Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 1:21 PM
I've always been of the notion that the stronger the command of form the better the poet. You interpret the sonnet well. Thanks for sharing my friend..............peace!
Stebbings Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 5:41 AM
Thank you, Richard, very kind of you. Pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry
R. V. Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Good company, Barry. She is cute as in the photo! I enjoyed your verse.
Stebbings Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 10:22 AM
Thank you, Ram, I am pleased you enjoyed it but there is not a photo. It must be something on your browser. // Barry
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