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Caterpillar

Caterpillar Caterpillar looks around, Sees butterfly on the wing. Feeling underdeveloped Patiently waits for the Spring. Barry Stebbings 09/23/17

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Ram R. V.

Date: 10/8/2017 5:20:00 PM

Excellent, Barry. A wonderful notion nicely put. I have a similar poem entitled "Paradox," posted on PoetrySoup. If you find time, go through it and I would appreciate your comments. I'm glad, Barry, that we are on the same wavelength:-)

Lin Lane

Date: 9/23/2017 2:04:00 PM

We could all use that lesson. Good write, Barry.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/24/2017 1:33:00 PM

Thank you, LIn. // Barry

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/23/2017 10:06:00 AM

Made me smile. Sweet pen.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/23/2017 12:37:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen. // Barry