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A Fabulous Beast

I met a fabulous beast today, I met him in a zoo. I was looking at a tiger, And he was looking too. Such strength and dreadful power He carried with such grace, And there he was behind the glass And we were face to face. A beast of such nobility A king was what I saw, So full of menacing presence I felt rooted to the floor. He fixed his eyes upon me With a cold and murderous stare. I'm glad that I was over here, And he was over there. Once he was the ruler, The lord of all was he. And now he's here, trapped in this pen. A prisoner, is what I see. Entry for EARLY APRIL 2018 PREMIERE CONTEST , ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME, UP TO A MAX OF 20 lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand. Placed 6th.

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Date: 4/3/2018 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with well-written descriptive poem. Rhyme and rhythm perfect.
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Gary Smith
Date: 4/4/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 4/3/2018 4:15:00 PM
Hello Gary congrats on the placement'
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Gary Smith
Date: 4/3/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Joe :)
Date: 4/3/2018 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Gary. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 4/3/2018 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 4/2/2018 4:56:00 PM
Vivid Gary. Well done :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 4/2/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 4/2/2018 4:13:00 PM
Should be a winner, Gary. I really like this piece, good luck. +Fav. // Barry
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Gary Smith
Date: 4/2/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Barry :)

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