Sneezes

Sneezes
Those who live in the Hebrides’s
Sometimes suffer from the sneezes.
And this is because cold breezes
Blow directly off the seas’s.
12/10/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:35 PM
This is a fun one Barry :)
Stebbings Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Horn Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Away and Closet Will Stay Had to put Christmas things away, With so much sadness and dismay; My each stocking; Memory blocking; Until next year in closet will stay. Jim Horn I remember Captain Stubbing.
Stebbings Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 12:30 PM
???
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 8:09 PM
This is really cute. So they pronounce Hebrides as sneezes. I never heard of that place before!
Stebbings Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Andrea, it is a play on words.
Tripp Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Lol...Love those rhymes. Very creative and cunning.
Stebbings Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 1:56 PM
Thank you, Rhoda.
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 4:37 PM
ha ha ha great word play Barry:-) hugs jan xx
Stebbings Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Jan.
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December 11, 2017 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Jan.
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