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Your Eyes Are There

The tree stays empty No bird no breeze no glow worm The soil looks morose Dense clouds have gathered On and around the grey tree Blooms are comatose Getting rid of frost Only last night it blossomed Into a fountain Alas, to no end No bird from your shrubbery Winter in my breath Up and underneath This load of cloud with no face Restlessness for rain No, no more moaning For I know your eyes are there If not now, later None knows how and when Your pink pigeons smile and fly My flame is orange ___________________________ 20 March 2017

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Date: 3/23/2017 9:15:00 AM
Dear Probar, To me, you have written a situational sensation. Life is full of major similarities! Hope springs eternal. 7 My best to you, chuck
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/23/2017 11:33:00 AM
Right ... Thank you ... Probir.
Date: 3/22/2017 5:49:00 PM
Bravo!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 10:52:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/22/2017 5:42:00 PM
Excellent Haikus, congratulations on POTD, Roy. :))
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Date: 3/22/2017 10:55:00 PM
Thank you, Roy ...
Date: 3/22/2017 3:03:00 PM
Guptaji, Congratulations for ur poem being honored as POTD..........//Manmath
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 10:54:00 PM
Thank you so much ....
Date: 3/22/2017 1:58:00 PM
Lovely Haikus, congratulations on potd :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 10:56:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/22/2017 1:36:00 PM
Congrats on being the POTD. This is a string of very well composed haiku.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 10:57:00 PM
Thank you, Janis ...
Date: 3/22/2017 9:59:00 AM
A big congratulations on your well deserved poem... Beautiful haikus....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 11:03:00 PM
Thank you , Supraja ...
Date: 3/22/2017 8:28:00 AM
Nicely strung together Probir, I especially like "winter in my breath". Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 3/22/2017 9:01:00 AM
Yes, winter in breath is relatable to most of us ... but the windows in the eyes exist too ... Thank you, Phil ...
Date: 3/22/2017 8:11:00 AM
Brilliant Probir, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie for reading my figurative Haiku string ...
Date: 3/22/2017 7:52:00 AM
- Beautifully haikus, Probir - # 7 - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thank you, Anne for liking the poem in haiku form ...
Date: 3/22/2017 7:41:00 AM
Well-written poem.... congrats on being selected.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your feel good upon reading my simple poem on certain profound emotions ...
Date: 3/22/2017 6:52:00 AM
Hello Probir. This is exquisite poetry. Everything within this entry is poetic in my eyes. Congratulations on it being chosen Poem Of The Day. This was a pleasure to turn to this morning with quiet gentle imagery. Well done and expressed in its entirety.
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Date: 3/22/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thanks for your literary comments, Lisa ... I do appreciate ...
Date: 3/21/2017 5:53:00 AM
Beautifully written set of Haiku, Probir. Each Haiku leading naturally to the next. A Fav. +7 // Barry
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/21/2017 6:22:00 AM
After quite some time, Barry ... thank you ...
Date: 3/20/2017 3:09:00 PM
These are just wonderful Probir! Excellent haiku...going into my Faves my friend! 7 : )
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Date: 3/21/2017 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie ...
Date: 3/20/2017 1:33:00 PM
wonderful string of 'ku, probir... splendid.. huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/21/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, nette ... Thanks for the 'ku too ... it is so compatible with Bengali tongue and ear
Date: 3/20/2017 9:33:00 AM
Beautiful piece. I especially like the color images in last 2 lines.
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Date: 3/21/2017 6:12:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and liking ...
Date: 3/20/2017 8:52:00 AM
Brilliant set of haikus Guptaji. Well done.A7.................//Manmath
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/20/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Manmathji for your visit and liking ...
Date: 3/20/2017 8:19:00 AM
OMG so many pearls in a necklace of Haiku? Fabulous my friend, Probir! A seven for each: 7-7-7-7-7-7and 7!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/20/2017 9:09:00 AM
So generous you are ... Thank you ...

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