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There were three mice, members of the mob Wanted to retire, so planned one last job It was deep winter and it started to snow But they weren't deterred, and the job was a go. Their names were Gnasher, Scratcher and Dred And you dared not cross them or you'd end up dead Even cats were afraid of their deadly scratch But very soon they would meet their match. The target they hit was John O'Neils dairy But things were now going to get a bit scary At the main entrance was a large welcome mat And sprawled all across it was this mean looking cat. Their luck was in and the cat was asleep They ran towards him and then took a leap There was a small hole by the front door Soon they were in, and on the shop floor. With some small cartons they built a bridge Reached the door handle and opened the fridge In the mousey world it was the ultimate goal A rare box of cheddar cheese and that's what they stole. Meanwhile outside puss began to wake up Was very thirsty and wanted a sup Then in the snow small footprints he spied The game was now up for the three mice inside. He spotted the thieves and he gave chase But they sprinted off at a very fast pace The God of mice was looking down on them today They didn't get the cheddar, but they got clean away. The camera's were played back the very next day As the drama unfolded there were gasps of dismay Puss was so happy his boss he did please By foiling the robbery and saving the cheese. O'Neil was so impressed with the actions of his cat He rewarded him with sardines and a brand new mat But for the three poor mice, it ended in tears They were eventually arrested and all got ten years. Written 16th January 2018

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Date: 3/21/2020 10:13:00 AM
Tom, an amusing poem with a moral. I enjoyed reading the end rhyme. A clever write. ~ Sonia
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Date: 3/21/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Sonia, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/19/2020 9:53:00 AM
Oh Tom! This is just delightful. It gave me a much needed laugh and a smile. The poem really flows - there is energy and movement start to finish. I could see this as an illustrated children's book. Congratulations! Over fork Over!
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Date: 3/19/2020 10:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Sam. I'm happy you enjoyed the humour Over Fork Over Tom
Date: 11/16/2018 2:29:00 PM
This is so much fun!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/17/2018 5:41:00 AM
Thanks P.S. , glad you enjoyed it. Tom.
Date: 3/27/2018 12:26:00 PM
Love it... must explore more Sir Tom!!! Cheers, His Happiness!!!
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Date: 3/27/2018 12:38:00 PM
Thanks Jack, check out ,where did the years go.
Date: 2/1/2018 3:08:00 PM
You commit the crime, you gotta do the time!!! Brilliant poem!! :-)
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Date: 2/1/2018 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Lisa. Glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 1/18/2018 8:46:00 PM
These three mice were more than likely blind to the fact that crime doesn't pay…so glad they were caught during the cheddar cheese caper! Very entertaining write Tom!~Che :)
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Date: 1/19/2018 1:53:00 AM
And let it be a warning to all the criminal mice out there. Glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom
Date: 1/18/2018 8:00:00 AM
Hi Tom, I really liked your well written story, enjoyed from start to end. :))
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Date: 1/18/2018 8:21:00 AM
Roy, Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Regards Tom.
Date: 1/18/2018 7:45:00 AM
Your story is so fantastic, I love the rhyme and humour!! I could see this happening :) Not a nice end to a retirement plan at all xD
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Date: 1/18/2018 7:56:00 AM
Sneha, Thank you for your comment, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Regards Tom
Date: 1/17/2018 3:29:00 PM
Tom you have a real great way with words, some great lines in your excellent poem..
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Date: 1/17/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank you. I do prefer to cover serious issues but occasionly I have a go at humour. Glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom.
Date: 1/17/2018 6:38:00 AM
Entertaining, witty and didactic story that many can be benefited from, especially children, dear friend, Tom! Superb work!
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Date: 1/17/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, I'm glad you enjoyed it.I suppose there is a message there, crime does not pay. Even a lump of cheese stolen is theft . Regards Tom
Date: 1/16/2018 3:47:00 PM
Absolutely delightful. This should be turned into a children's book. Excellent from start to finish!
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Date: 1/16/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Richard, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.I might give that idea some thought. Regards Tom
Date: 1/16/2018 9:45:00 AM
Just my type of story John, brilliant. Definitely a Fav. // Barry
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Date: 1/16/2018 9:56:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed my bit of humour Barry. Regards Tom.
Date: 1/16/2018 9:26:00 AM
The cheesy title pulled me in (literally lol) and i thoroughly enjoyed your fun tale. Your poems have such a wonderful flow and the rhyme is sublime and i love your witty rhymes and I'm so glad you are on soup!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2018 10:37:00 AM
I'm so glad you joined too!!!! It took an on line friend a month of 'persuading' before I joined. I was a total novice to poetry but she saw something in some of the scribbles i posted on a friend's poetry page on FB - and its the best decision I made to dip my toe in the water:-) hugs jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/16/2018 9:58:00 AM
Jan I was looking for a poetry website and came across this one. So glad I did Regards Tom
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Date: 1/16/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thought I'd compose something today and went for a bike ride and the thoughts just came into my head and it just seemed to flow. We all need a bit of fun in our lives, it must have been your limericks that inspired me haha. Glad you enjoyed it Jan. Regards Tom

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