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Let's Fly, Li'L Bro


Hush, hush, li'l bro, mama will come soon,
Let's fly till then and touch the full moon,

Hush, hush, li'l bro, just look at our hands,
Let's fly together to far-off lands, 

Hush, hush, li'l bro, let's fly hand airplanes,
We'll stay united till life remains,

Hush, hush, li'l bro, won't you close your eyes?
Come, fly with us 'bove those bright blue skies?

Hush, hush, li'l bro, we both love you deep,
We'll play with you till you fall asleep.


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#Image 1 
Contest: Photostory
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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11/12/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/24/2017 1:33:00 PM
If I never said congrats on this one, I am saying it now. It was a well deserved win. I am noticing that you have not put up a post in some while!! Gosh, Jo, I hope you are ok. Let me see if I can find a poem of yours I have not yet read. Also I wish you a very merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/14/2017 9:21:00 AM
I felt like congratulating you once again. Congrats, Jo:-)
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Date: 12/5/2017 12:14:00 PM
Just a wonderful write Jo, seems like you have lived these moments, if not, then you have a great imagination, well deserved win!
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Date: 12/2/2017 10:03:00 PM
Congrats, Jo, on your win. Intimate in tone and touching:-)
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Date: 12/2/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest , Jo, you really put me on the scene with this wonderful scene.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/2/2017 5:44:00 PM
Dropping back with my Congrats
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Date: 11/27/2017 6:09:00 PM
a beautiful interpretation of the image:-) good luck Jo this is so sweet:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2017 6:21:00 PM
This is wonderful...I like it a lot...All the best my friend
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Date: 11/19/2017 12:59:00 PM
ohh, so charmed by this sibling bonding.. i like the naughty mood of this piece, jo... huggs
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Date: 11/18/2017 11:29:00 PM
Your entry is so sweet Jo. I hope it does really well! : )
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Date: 11/18/2017 10:26:00 AM
Beautifully done....
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Date: 11/18/2017 9:57:00 AM
Wonderful write Jo...best wishes
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:05:00 AM
So lovely Jo... Beautiful interpretation...Reads like a winner....
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Date: 11/17/2017 9:13:00 AM
Loverly! Did not notice the photo until after I read the poem, but was immediately immersed in childhood. Oh those hand airplanes! Triple wowsa! ~ john
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Date: 11/16/2017 12:32:00 PM
It is a beautiful tale of brothers love.
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Date: 11/15/2017 4:57:00 AM
Touching write Jo.
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:50:00 PM
oh you interpreted it so wonderfully, Jo. I wish I could just sit down and DO this one so well.
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Date: 11/14/2017 9:36:00 AM
This is wonderful, Jo. Such a lovely telling of the picture. +Fav. // Barry
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Date: 11/13/2017 9:04:00 PM
Ii don't know why, but waves of nostalgia hit me. Maybe because I'm a 'big sister.' Loved it, Jo. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/13/2017 4:07:00 AM
- A lovely and sweet picture of love, Jo - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2017 11:00:00 PM
A very lovely poem, Jo. Brigs back CH memories.
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:39:00 PM
Such a sweet and touching write Jo. Beautifully written loving sentiments of the joys of childhood and family. Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/12/2017 2:53:00 PM
How tender and sweet. Loved this piece. It goes so well with the photo. Nothing like brotherly love...
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Date: 11/12/2017 11:52:00 AM
Sweet, sweet lullaby, and sweet, sweet picture!
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Date: 11/12/2017 11:30:00 AM
This is sweet Jo..
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