At Halloween

At Halloween

     At Halloween, just a few nights ago,
     I saw a sinister dark and tangled wood
     Beside a town where two rivers flow.

     Entering by hidden paths not many know,
     There an old and crumbling castle stood	
     At Halloween just a few nights ago.

     From that castle a hooting owl flew low,
     Leading me through that dark and tangled wood
     Beside a town where two rivers flow,

     Ancient halls lit by shaded new moon’s glow
     Where spectral guardians in armour stood
     At Halloween just a few nights ago,

     I was lost in that place dark spirits know,
     The owl perching in that haunted wood
     Beside a town where two rivers flow

     Close by that castle old where shadows grow
     And silent ghosts of warriors stood
     At Halloween just a few nights ago,
     Beside a town where two rivers flow.

     10/31/2022

     Entered into Halloween Poetry Contest
     By Emile Pinet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 11/18/2022 11:42:00 AM
Excellent poetry Barry - really enjoyed this Halloween poem of a few nights ago, where two rivers flow. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/4/2022 6:14:00 AM
Great imagery here, Barry. Congrats on POTD...and best wishes in the contest. Charlie
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Date: 11/2/2022 5:36:00 PM
As each creepy scene unfolds, I can almost see that castle and those ghosts of warriors. Such a spooky town indeed. If it's not already, your poem should be in a book. Congratulations Barry, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/2/2022 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Barry.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, Milton. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 8:38:00 AM
Congradulations on your POTD, Barry, a good entry for the contest. Good luck! Enjoy your special day! Bill
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Bill. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 8:08:00 AM
A wonderful Villanelle poem for Halloween Barry. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Belle. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 7:36:00 AM
I love this. Congratulations for POTD :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 7:14:00 AM
Barry, a wonderful Halloween poem, best of luck in the contest and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 12:08:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 6:01:00 AM
Fabulous story-telling in a perfect spooky rhyme Barry. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 12:06:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honour. A brilliant spooky poem!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Malabika // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 4:14:00 AM
Barry, congratulations on your POTD honors!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 6:40:00 AM
Thank you, Mike. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 4:06:00 AM
Barry, a spooky poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Tania. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 2:41:00 AM
- An excellent Halloween poem, Barry - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. -
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 1:53:00 AM
Quite a spooky tale Barry, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 6:24:00 AM
Thank you, Tom // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 1:18:00 AM
So apt for the theme, enjoyed. Congrats on POTD, Barry
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 6:21:00 AM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2022 1:15:00 AM
An eerie Halloween tale set in the tangled wood, Congrats on POTD
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2022 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph. // Barry
Date: 11/1/2022 4:52:00 AM
This is a great one! Love the progression. The setting’s dark and sinister. I would put this at the top! A fave, Barry!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/1/2022 11:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim, much appreciated. I think the Villanelle works well for sard and moody themes. // Barry
Date: 10/31/2022 7:52:00 AM
That's a wonderful and spooky poem, Barry. Best of luck in contest!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/31/2022 11:29:00 AM
Thank you very much, Ann // Barry
Date: 10/31/2022 4:41:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I think that would be a very scary place to be. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/31/2022 11:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara. // Barry
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