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The Melancholy Way

The melancholy way she twists her tresses. Brilliantly, seductively blond; forever mad. The pallor of her face, her wail expresses. Off and on her rocker, the specter confesses, But excuses the way she murdered the lad. The melancholy way she twists her tresses — It’s clearly the mirror, she addresses. “In the end,” she says, “he was just a cad.” The pallor of her face, her wail expresses. Prince Charming wasn’t happy with her excesses. She is clever - wants the mirror to think she’s sad. The melancholy way she twists her tresses. Sixteen, what a bombshell - her curve progresses, draws lust, in her heyday before her present, bad. The pallor of her face, her wail expresses. “No one tells me what to do!” she stresses. Unlike her Victorian gowns, her anger’s not a fad. The melancholy way she twists her tresses. The pallor of her face, her wail expresses. 10/31/2022 THIRD-PERSON VILLANELLE L. Milton Hankins

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Date: 11/2/2022 4:08:00 PM
Kim, well done, best of luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2022 7:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania!
Date: 11/1/2022 6:53:00 PM
Very nice, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 11/1/2022 3:18:00 PM
Best wishes, Kim. Thiis is hauntingly, beautiful. Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 7:47:00 PM
Thanks, Pangie!
Date: 11/1/2022 6:03:00 AM
I find villanelle a difficult form. But you have done a great job . All the best in the contest, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 6:14:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! They are not easy!
Date: 11/1/2022 4:09:00 AM
Brilliant, Kim. Deserves to gain a 1st., Fav for me. // Barry
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 4:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, Barry! :)
Date: 11/1/2022 1:21:00 AM
A tricky form Kim, but you have made it look easy, best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 4:44:00 AM
It is a tough form! My week’s been good! God bless you and yours ~ Kim
Date: 11/1/2022 12:22:00 AM
Gives me the impression of the opposite poem of La Dame sans merci.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! I looked up the poem!
Date: 10/31/2022 6:09:00 PM
This seems excellent to me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Jeff! I appreciate it!
Date: 10/31/2022 5:38:00 PM
Kim, this is a great Villanelle that is really excellent. Your imagery along with the superb diction shed more beauty on your writing. Warm Regards and Best Wishes!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/31/2022 5:43:00 PM
Thanks so much! Means a lot, Lasaad! These are not easy to write!

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