The Melancholy Way

The melancholy way she twists her tresses. Brilliantly, seductively blond; forever mad. The pallor of her face, her wail expresses. Off and on her rocker, the specter confesses, But excuses the way she murdered the lad. The melancholy way she twists her tresses — It’s clearly the mirror, she addresses. “In the end,” she says, “he was just a cad.” The pallor of her face, her wail expresses. Prince Charming wasn’t happy with her excesses. She is clever - wants the mirror to think she’s sad. The melancholy way she twists her tresses. Sixteen, what a bombshell - her curve progresses, draws lust, in her heyday before her present, bad. The pallor of her face, her wail expresses. “No one tells me what to do!” she stresses. Unlike her Victorian gowns, her anger’s not a fad. The melancholy way she twists her tresses. The pallor of her face, her wail expresses. 10/31/2022 THIRD-PERSON VILLANELLE L. Milton Hankins
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Kitchin Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 4:08 PM
Kim, well done, best of luck in the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 7:29 AM
Thank you so much, Tania!
Bayles Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 6:53 PM
Very nice, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 7:47 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Romios Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 3:18 PM
Best wishes, Kim. Thiis is hauntingly, beautiful. Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 7:47 PM
Thanks, Pangie!
George Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 6:03 AM
I find villanelle a difficult form. But you have done a great job . All the best in the contest, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 6:14 AM
Thank you, Valsa! They are not easy!
Stebbings Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 4:09 AM
Brilliant, Kim. Deserves to gain a 1st., Fav for me. // Barry
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 4:43 AM
Thanks so much, Barry! :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 1:21 AM
A tricky form Kim, but you have made it look easy, best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 4:44 AM
It is a tough form! My week’s been good! God bless you and yours ~ Kim
Buhagiar Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 12:22 AM
Gives me the impression of the opposite poem of La Dame sans merci.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Thank you, Victor! I looked up the poem!
Kyser Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 6:09 PM
This seems excellent to me!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 4:47 AM
Thank you, Jeff! I appreciate it!
Poet Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Kim, this is a great Villanelle that is really excellent. Your imagery along with the superb diction shed more beauty on your writing. Warm Regards and Best Wishes!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 5:43 PM
Thanks so much! Means a lot, Lasaad! These are not easy to write!
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