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Wraiths gallivant here

Amid the shades of night, in Spring
a wraith descends, sole to release
a dancer's form - raindrop cerise
- one faint caress of fingertips.

Amid the shadows she appears
to walk in blooms and promise feasts
because night's solitude emits,
dark's unsubstantial of tears.

How soft the numbness of hung air
defines night's secrets and evokes
prodigious our dreams and scopes
to gallivant from twinge to stare?

The dreams of night advance to flare
and they become lone blinks and scars
shine like the mettlesome of stars
are steady, sad and foursquare.

This abstract process of cognition
trajectories of souls brings close,
the light's evanescence depose,
our verse in verbatim rendition.

With moistened lips in rain's tall drapes
she comes; the feasts acquire glory
we dance on a remote quarry,
where night adorns the marble scapes.

© G. V., 05-02-2013
(Iambic Tetrameter)

Sponsor: nette onclaud
Placement: 1st

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 10:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on a fantastic Ist Place win, Giorgio!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 10:11:00 AM
    great poem. Congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Thank you all friends!! :)

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:47:00 AM
    Poetically divine!! Congrats on your TOP SPOT!!

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 9:58:00 PM
    Giorgio. you are a master poet, you make the clumsiness of symbols so beautiful, congratulations my friend....Peter

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 9:32:00 PM
    Congratulations..... :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 9:04:00 PM
    Hello Georgio, congratulations. A mighty poet you are.... Love Linda

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 8:32:00 PM
    Georgio, I hesitate to use superlatives but I must say this is truly the best!

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 5:36:00 AM
    big congrats Giorgio on your super win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 11:42:00 PM
    you sway witht the breeze, G... cheers to you for a top win in my contest.. do check my blog!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 7:12:00 PM
    Your poems are out of this world, congratulations Giorgio, have you ever smelled the perfume named "Giorgio" by Beverly Hills, well to me it smells like bottled sunshine, and so does this, xxx

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Well deserved first place! congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Thanks to all friends!

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 3:43:00 PM
    Oh my....I found myself holding my breath....I do that when I can't wait to see how it ends....awesome....congratulations

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Beautiful and expressive writing, Giorgio. Congratulations on a well-deserved first placement. Bravo!!! Well done, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Beautifully written Giorgio, a tremendous win, congrats...Peter

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 1:34:00 PM
    You are an amazing poet........far beyond what most of us can even imagine.....just stunning! Well deserved win!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 7:54:00 PM
    G, the true reflection of the wrath of peace. I like the apparition of a person in her exact likeness. I like the vision; the unreal image ends well. I enjoyed the poem... LINDA

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Very interesting read, imagery, and use of vocabulary. :) Thanks for sharing your soul through your poetry and thanks for the visit to my work.

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    Date: 5/3/2013 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Eileen. G.