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Below is the poem entitled Unspoken which was written by poet Val Peters. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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You are broken
And you are torn
Your heartache unspoken
On you're grave they mourn

Look at the sunrise 
Feel it disappear 
Drifting along cloudy skies
Your end isn't here

Inside you feel forsaken
While a fire burns inside
But don't you be mistaken
Your will be defied

Don't look back
It only brings regret
The past is gone
Please don't forget

As the storm comes in
Stand your ground
It will leave again
You will be found

You have been been broken
And you have been torn
But your heartache isn't unspoken
On your grave i have sworn

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  1. Date: 3/29/2009 4:48:00 PM
    I think you for got the "g" on you're ?ave they morn. Other then that a very good rhyme, great flow and meaning. Judy Riley