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To My Child

Neither look at the pined behind,
Nor waste the eyes at far away.
Today hides in its thorax
What you seek for,
so dear,never be a musk-deer.
Stoop to pick fair and true.

Black poisons have been kept in bottles
Beyond the horizon, 
But fear little if you care a little.
See the rapture, my dear,
Of grazing buffalo,
Which will be slaughtered next day.

When your lamp gets dim,
Fuel it with old pleasures.
When the snow freeze you,
Dissolve it with warmth of home.
When you lose precious things,
Think of the time umbilical cord broken.

Never miss your white ticket
On the way ,my child.
You will follow me,
Sometimes, I shall you.
Since farewell tears are garbage of emotion,
Be always happy,my child.

For 'Children' contest by Debora Guzzi
(Musk-deer seeks musk without knowing the fact that musk is kept within itself)

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  1. Date: 12/14/2011 5:47:00 AM
    Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Fab. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 8:51:00 AM
    nice work......................

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 5:11:00 AM
    Much much clearer. still multilayers, an exquisteloving message one last bit of input 2nd to the last line change the word "garbage" to "refuse" which means deny or reject as well as garbage trash or waste!! BIG congrad's so well done! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 7:05:00 AM
    Great advice Fabiyas, thank you for your always kind comments.. They bring a smile to my face.. ;)

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 1:24:00 PM
    very powerful, you are getting the nouns, adjectives, verbs and are loosing me because the bread trail of prepositions are missing..sending soup mail

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 2:49:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Fabiyas!Nice inspirational words you have penned.

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 6:02:00 PM
    words of wisdom for a child. I really liked the third stanza most of all. And the last stanza where you imparted the final pearl of wishes. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 12:48:00 PM
    Soft tender poetry FABIYAS and so special to write of a child ..your child... hard to let go when they grow.. a poignant piece my friend.. enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 10:56:00 AM
    Good one and good advice..Don't look behind and never to far away for we can only live for today..Enjoy today is a good philosophy to have in life..Your presence at my work lifted my spirit this afternoon..Sara