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Thracian Eve

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© 05-24-2013, G. V., All Rights Reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)

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Thracian Eve

Subsequent the fog walls act
white solitaire of dampness sway
the sovereign tall of woods display
- adaxial their lives protract.

Amidst the woods and in the haze
diffused in air's the deep green light
advertent nymph's in veils white
- and ancient Thracian spirits' phase.

An aisling she appeared and ere
her solitude his stare absorbed
she spelled his name - a song birds curbed
- betrothal mountains' claim of ne'er.

A melody of singing aves
upon the slopes where lantern-moons
interconnected with the tunes,
- aloneness of her festal Eves.

Belike beams floated on air streams
the Gods invited while fog's soars,
agremones clothe ancient wars
entwined with Strymon's seaward themes.

Aberdevines on Thracian wold
and nightingales' expanded song
the mountain mists embrace erelong
- abthane the temples eyes behold.

She fled to sooth on ether's heights
steep slopes that mortals followed thence
amid the thyme their lives commence
when nightingales invite the nights.

© G. V., 05-24-2013 All rights reserved
(Ode - Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:36:00 PM
    A very mystical and magical poem, G! I loved the almost dreamlike realm that you described here so vividly. A very beautiful poem to read! I must add this one to my favorites! :)

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 9:49:00 AM
    your words fall beautifully among the page...the images are so vivid and pretty... enjoyed this one :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Your words have a touch of magic to them in this write I loved it thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:58:00 PM
    You sing of dark you sing of light What else? have a blessed evening G, xxx

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Much Beauty in your lines G... stopping by to say thanks for the cheering up words, yesterday... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 4:41:00 AM
    I think tetrameter befits to such expressions of describing a scene or personification.. etc. you have done well, Veneto