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Surreal Nature

That serenading season claims the spotlight once again. In awe, we gaze up, reminded how ineffectual human noises are. The simple tinkle of dew on a tender leaf, or the whooshing wind as he playfully steals away the drop from his green friend, is the best ensemble ever to grace my fickle ears. The harmonious cacophony, thunder sounds in the great big sky, speaks wiser words than any teacher ever taught. I hear the call, surreal Natures call: join me and lets make music! BUT as soon as those words are aired, they become a part  of the air, lost in the entirety of human waste. Lost in the rumpus of industry, in the hullabaloo of war...yet...when the rainy season approaches,  those memorable notes beat in the drums of my ears...

soul, rock or rap Each hum composes melodies Natures opus!
22 September 2013

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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 4:35:00 AM
    Yvette, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:16:00 PM
    I am sorry I have been out of the loop for so long, I hope I can back into sync soon but many congratulations on your win Yvette love xx

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Yvette, , awesome Haibun. Have yourself a sweet day.......... LOVE SKAT

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:56:00 AM
    nice win Yvette, xox~ PD

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:06:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Yvette

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:53:00 PM
    Oh wow....this is wonderful.......and perfect ending "nature's opus"......I love that line!! Well done!!!

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:50:00 PM
    stopping by to say congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Great musical piece, congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:17:00 PM
    I love the phrase "Nature's Opus" Splendid ending congrats on your winning poem xxx

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:59:00 PM
    this is a beautifully penned haibun...a clever write :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:35:00 AM
    This is a great poem for real. I enjoyed your write. Please keep it up. JM

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:24:00 PM
    a very unique and fun to read poem. I like how you thought outside the box.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:58:00 PM
    Very beautiful expressions, short and sweet, Yvette

    Ndlovu Avatar Yvette Lisa Ndlovu
    Date: 9/24/2013 12:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you:)