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Quantum Phases

Brooding by a quiet, hollow evening
 Abandoned by the sun that set too early
 Mute voices stepped tender in his proud head
 Of hurts, longing and forgotten dreams.. 

 Will he ever find her again?
 She was so perfect, made for his senses 
 Was he right in keeping her away?
 When no one could ever wake him like she did..

 She had come to him on chance’s arrow
 Said she had been moving to him all the time..
 Bound to a life of conventions, he couldn’t move
 Holding back, when she never would have taken.

 Tears for a soul that had walked to give
 A quantum phase in his lone, distant life
 Turning back though for a final moment 
 Both their senses rang of cruel losses...

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  1. Date: 3/26/2015 8:49:00 PM
    An arrow broken on a stone of sorrow, marked by dreams only dreamt to die...there is a real taste of bizarre melancholia freedom to this sad poem of heavy goodbye Bindu. "She had come to him on Chance's arrow..." I love the audacity of that passion, and attempt at love. You make sadness something beautiful and educative my Diva...J.A.B.

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 9:29:00 PM
    Just clicking around and can't find one of yours that is new for me. but this was a great one to see again.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 3/6/2014 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, lovely lady:)
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:10:00 AM
    Contemplative...very deep, Bindu, I love it! jimbo

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 5:27:00 PM
    this is amazing Quantum poetry

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:28:00 PM
    what a criss-crossed life between two people, bindu... i feel they were not on the same page?,,, this is how i perceived the message of your haunting, symbolic write... superbly done as always!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 8:19:00 AM
    You have such a unique way of expressing yourself, I'm blown away.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 7:19:00 PM
    As usual you have written a beautiful soulful poem. Love it!!

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 9:06:00 AM
    Much to question here. Longing, loss, remembrance, amnesia...a lot of polar opposites embedded in this thing called love, it seems. Powerful writing.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Love has many faces and this poem cries with longing and sadness.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 3:55:00 AM
    - Bindu, a really well written poem ..... Maybe he has lost his best "card" .... - Love is difficult sometimes... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 3:05:00 AM
    Very sad expressions on love, Bindu