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Out of the shadows-2

You would  ‘lol’ to learn
I was  twisted like ‘betwixt’
In the labored churn.

You know it was like reasoning
With a summer evening 
On the need for rains. 

But you would agree
It hastened your expiation 
Well out of the shadows

And I was happy too
That the shadows were out
They were not waters, though

But  were long and stubbornly so
Probably meant for another day
Where we  did not belong to.

19 jul 13, freeverse.

By S.Jagathsimhan Nair
For: Giorgio's contest
Motif: Philosophical.

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  1. Date: 7/1/2014 4:23:00 PM
    Charming, simply charming courting at its best from a gentleman ... Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 6:25:00 AM
    Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, nair

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:57:00 AM
    jag awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 6:54:00 PM
    Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 4:35:00 PM
    - A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Jag !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 7:56:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one today..Sometimes things are not meant to be..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 12:28:00 PM
    hi, jag.. your wit shines as always... charming write that flows.. a winner for me..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:57:00 AM
    a very interesting take on the contest, my friend. You finished with a very clever line.