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Onyx Rose

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Onyx Rose

Insular is she this Onyx Rose,
Kissed by crescent moon glows.
Her rapturous face lifts to inhale,
Savoring petrichor atmospheric trail.

Raindrops descend thirst chastised,
Exquisite supple petals baptized.
Fragrance enchants with apathetic sighs,
Beckoning the midnight fireflies.

Frenzying the sweet aromatic night,
She mourns not for abstained sunlight.
Harvest not this fallen Onyx Rose,
For she is fickle where she grows.

Her callous thorns deeply lance,
If you should pluck her by chance.
Beseeching to heaven chained to stone,
Her celestial descent well known.

It is said an angel had fallen from grace,
Renowned for her beauteous poetic face.
Vanity the downfall, her deadliest sin,
Exquisiteness only deep as sable skin.

Decaying as death claimed the fall,
Her essence adhered to stone garden wall.
In her place beauty lugubriously grows,
Reborn the fallen Onyx Rose.

Envious of iridescent stars above,
For she is bereft of heaven's love.
Onyx Rose thrives within darkness sublime,
Her woesome fairytale told once upon a time.

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:06:00 PM
    well done Lisa, congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:56:00 PM
    Lisa, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 2:03:00 PM
    Your poem feels so big, as to shadow an the prologue to a bards tale. I love it...especially this stanza: "Raindrops descend thirst chastised, Exquisite supple petals baptized." Pure beauty.

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 1:37:00 PM
    Very beautiful and touching piece....a well-deserved win! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:00:00 AM
    SImply beautiful, Poetess!! A well-deserved first place win. Big Congrats! Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Congrats on the first place win the contest.P.D.

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 2:04:00 AM
    A very beautiful and excellent poem. My hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Poetess! Thank you so much for sharing this great winning piece. Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:58:00 PM
    You have taken the rose, and she has become mysterious and enchanting!! Lovely winning piece......congratulations!

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:27:00 PM
    Deserves all the praise this poet can muster.... Congratulations on a most enjoyable read..... Jake

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:09:00 PM
    magnificent write...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 7:23:00 PM
    I love the idea of an onyx Rose, congratulations on your poetic win xxx

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:43:00 PM
    PD: congratulations on a great poem and a great victory in my contest. G.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 4:07:00 AM

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Lisa a wonderful write. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:51:00 PM
    Lisa, your poem is lovely... congratulations with your winning poem~ always* PD

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 12:11:00 PM
    One of my favorites Lisa!

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:34:00 PM
    thanks for sharing cool poem xoxo pd

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 3:54:00 PM
    Hello Lisa, love the image that started off a good deep fairy tale... i like the frenzy aroma image... this is very nice, and enigmatic... always~ pd

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 2:03:00 AM
    A deep ode to the femme fatale of the street. The imagery is spliced with an artist's touch. You have penned a poignant, cerebral homily. Loved it!