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No rose without thorns

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No rose without thorns

her bud a treasure 
with a hidden mystery 
shrouded in green 
concealing her strength 
weakness and own history 

her bending leaves reveal  
her brilliant color 
from timid to dazzling 
with greatest appeal 
and a growing collar 

an overwhelming scent 
with the greatest temptation 
vividly spread
in her paced environment 
a silent sensation 

her stem the bearer 
with cast-iron thorns 
in the same color green 
her apparent signal 
clearly warns 

the thorns
and their rose
intensify each other
sharp tips color and scent
shaded in a more sensible hose

a rose 
is not just a rose 
she unites 
her beauty and her beast 
she shares and shows

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  1. Date: 4/17/2014 7:39:00 AM
    A superb write.

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 4/17/2014 8:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-) hope and wish to find some new' stuff' written by YOU soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  1. Date: 4/6/2014 7:25:00 AM
    Fantastic images of a beautiful flower.

  1. Date: 4/3/2014 8:54:00 AM
    My favorite Dutch poet delivers another beautiful winner.. Congrats Elly!

  1. Date: 4/2/2014 5:38:00 PM
    HI ELLY, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/1/2014 4:22:00 AM
    Hi Elly, Congrats on your win. Your scented rose magically transferred her unique self through your wonderful description right to the heart of it's readers. Best regards Theresa xx

  1. Date: 3/31/2014 5:59:00 PM
    A very nice picture that you painted here, Elly. I really liked the rhyming, as well. A great poem! Congratulations on your win!