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Life's Waves

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Life's Waves

The currents pull
To roil, to warn, then slide away.
Swept off my feet and in I fell,
In undertow, beguiled, enslaved.
The foaming rip of tides betray
Life's waves.

May 15, 2013 for PD's Not Read Contest

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:24:00 PM
    Simple and beautiful. Congrats on your win. AO

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 7:24:00 PM
    Congratulations... :-)

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 6:01:00 PM
    Congratulations with your awesome poem. cRAIG, thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:46:00 AM
    life's waves...great metaphor, Craig...deep and salty!!

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Captivating Craig...loved it . Good luck..

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 3:09:00 PM
    oh it is another one in PD's contest. I really need to check that contest out. WEll done, Craig! was it an oldie?

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    Date: 5/16/2013 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    new one
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 2:27:00 PM
    Craig...this is worded so beautifully. Watch out or you will get drawn too far out! ;) Lovely write...I enjoyed this and amazed at it's depth.