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I Dreamed A Dream

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I Dreamed A Dream

I dreamed a dream last night,and wow was I charmed
Every crook on this tired ol`planet had been disarmed

Each and everyone of the bad guys..pointet their guns at me
..and me thinking "this is the end to whoever I wanted to be"

But still I woke up with a peaceful glorie above my head
Coz,out of the gun barrel pops a fancy rose,colored red

It was then I realized that the bad guys needed an understanding hand
The message..reach out a helping hand before time runs into the sand



A.Ertsland
17th.February 2012

PD`s contest: #2 placed winners..

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  1. Date: 6/2/2012 10:39:00 AM
    No wonder sa well deserved one....u have the power to ignite ur readers mind...u do well each and every time all the bst Arild...cheers !

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 9:04:00 AM
    You sure give a very uplifting message here, Arild-- Charles-- is it ok to call you Charles? :D I like how that rose bloomed from the gun instead :) I see this won, so super belated congrats to you! Btw I saw your reply to your blog, yup, my latest pen name here that I used was Pen Nee :), those were my initials in a twisted way "Enn Pee" hehe sounded better than Pee ;)-- I think it's pretty cool how you are using Earthland as well :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 5:16:00 PM
    A splendid write, Arild! Congrats on your win. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 5:47:00 PM
    Congrats on your expressive work making the winners' circle...Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 8:46:00 AM
    ARLID.. Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 8:11:00 AM
    Kuddos on your win, Arild! A thought provoking message. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 7:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Arild. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 7:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in PD's contest- JH

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 5:27:00 PM
    Great piece my friend.. Michael

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 4:19:00 PM
    congrats Arild on a super second place win for this elegant work of art in poetry.. mesmerizing lines luv..

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 7:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Arild. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 8:46:00 PM
    Great poem and congrats..

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 2:56:00 PM
    Arild, wonderful write. Congrats on making PD's winners list.....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 2:23:00 PM
    Fantastic imagination, loved my friend, bl

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 1:58:00 PM
    great imagery Arild.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in the contest Arild.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 3:52:00 AM
    Wow nice, congratulations Arild xx

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 9:12:00 PM
    congrats Arild on a great win for this dreamy delight luv..

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:38:00 PM
    Congrats. Arild on your super win, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 7:45:00 PM
    Arlid.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

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