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written 3rd Aug 2001

A whole year has past
 how much longer, will this really last
The harder she tries
 the more her hope, slowly dies

Why must this mother have to fight
 just to hold you all so tight
Telling you how much she loves you
 is something she REALLY needs to do

No one has listened to her cries
 she's finding it harder, just to get by
She smiles, and laughs
 to cover her broken, and bleeding heart

No one, can tell
 she has learnt, to do it so well
She needs you all to know 
 she never wanted to go

She hopes, and she prays
 you will all forgive her someday....

Copyright © Denise Hopkins

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  1. Date: 7/11/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Fine writing my dear Denise, you structured this poem well, you have a lot of talent this was written in 2001, I only started in 2000 so you are up with me and the best of them, you are a brilliant poet, you are like a cygnet turning into a beautiful swan, please keep up your standard and then blow me away with your inspiration like a true poet would. John