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Here I sit in a prison

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Here I sit in a prison

Here I sit in a prison,
boxed in with the rest of them,
slowly losing my imagination.

Now I'm just a number,
no time left to slumber,
I feel like going under.

Living against my will,
it seems like an endless hill,
losing a grasp on whats real.

Longing to break free,
why do they want me to be,
something that isnt me.

Repeating mindless tasks,
I hope this doesn't last,
I really wish it would pass.

Boxed in by four walls,
wandering the same old halls,
if only they would fall.

Following the orders of those who rule,
turning into an uncreative fool,
they call it school.

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Bryce, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 8:09:00 PM
    about your poem: lol, about school being a prison... I feel you loud and clear... ha ha..Sorry, you got me at the end... I was all feeling sorry for you, until i read it was not a real prison... he he LINDA

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 8:08:00 PM
    Hello Bryce, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Well done, my friend... You just about perfectly described it.... Great Work... Welcome to PSoup.... Jake