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Her Secret


                                          Winter’s collection
                                           White lace-trim and wide-side thong
                                            With bells and whistles


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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:09:00 PM
    LOL Wilma! I'm afraid I'd choose a pair without bells and whistles...uncomfortable you know. lol Hi Ruben!

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 6:35:00 AM
    Aint I glad I came across this one.. Now the boss wants to know why I am smiling.. Told him it's my secret ;) lol, Enjoyed this loads Ruben.. Thanks for the laughs ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 7:02:00 PM
    Very provocative, Ruben!

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 8:12:00 AM
    Woot Wew (haha how do you make the sound of someone whistling anyway???) haha that was supposed to be whistling, haha figures that I don't know how to whistle that's why! but yup, I do think this is all about Victoria's secret now, very nice Ruben ;)--nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 11:27:00 PM
    soupmail replies!

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 8:42:00 PM
    well for me it's downright sexy!

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 12:37:00 PM
    So glad u liked and understood my last line in my Limerick..some questioned as to what it meant but I have always heard this expression on the East Coast.. maybe its a New York thing ..haha.. thankxxx for the well wishes.. I am a contest addict Ruben.. can't resist.. if u enter good luck in advance.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 11:19:00 AM
    oh im so sorry for chaning your mood, i never meant to ruin anyones day, i only wish this child to be found...i think its such a shame, such a tragity that anyone would do such a thing to any family. <3 love always, Rain

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 10:36:00 AM
    Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 11:14:00 PM
    Quite a secret there, Rueben. A very revealing one! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 5:56:00 AM
    Interesting Senryu, Ruben! A mi me guista la tercera linea!! Te deseo un buen día y que lo aprvechas!! Gracias por tus comentarios, mi amigo and have a great time!...Chao, Gert

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 8:46:00 AM
    Well done Ruben, I can see, feel and hear it. If I tried real hard probably work in smell, taste as well. LOL ! Ruben , please read my latest narrative called DRAGON CALLED "DELERIUM TREMENS" Your poem titles were the inspiration for the piece. All the best, JT

  1. Date: 6/6/2010 8:16:00 PM
    Her victoria secret. :)

  1. Date: 6/6/2010 6:52:00 AM
    SOUP MAIL URGENT ...luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 6:43:00 PM
    I'll bet she gets a lot of whistles in that thong, Ruben. Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 5:46:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Ruben. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. It was a delight. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 1:34:00 PM
    I think We are in Florida :)!The Bells,the white stuff and frills and of course the whistles,Hold your breath Mr Ortellao,the secret? Ow that's' Victoria Secret',Its Winter,December maybe?,time for some shopping for your mamita,fun poem.Celene!

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 1:23:00 PM
    sounds like you are in luck, or shopping for your girl at Vicoria's secret around the x-mass season. LoL, that is what crossed my mine when I read your poem Ruben,..P.D.

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 12:44:00 PM
    OH LA LA Ruben... which chickie has this thong on? my friend... a lovely sight on the beaches I have been lying on however I am looking at the speedos....bad "Sweetheart" ...bad... but oh the views... haha..luv..

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 11:49:00 AM
    Victoria Secret, perhaps???????? A little white fur trim??? Ooo-la-la !!! :)