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Haiku ap813

cherry petals 
drift on the breeze ~
pink pond

April 8, 2013

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 12:44:00 PM
    A nice picture adorned in haiku. Lovely done. Congrats on your win. Sorry for late. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:16:00 PM
    When I start saying: "Haiku can NOT ever employ this, and also NOT that, and should ALWAYS employ this....then I join the ranks of hypocrites. Haiku is about discipline. We can evolve our own disciplines. When people enforce their disciplines upon you, then the enjoyment factor can easily take a nose-dive. But all of these are obvious statements that you already know.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:11:00 PM
    *cont'd* -- Relates to the opening imagery in a strong manner, as opposed to how some of the PS haiku nazis like to write them: cherry petals/drift on the breeze - chimney. Ha ha! Wtf? I started learning haiku as a child. This is wot I have learned since: there are hundreds of different styles and interpretations. I am simply rambling about my personal tastes. I am not claiming my tastes to be "right". That is a major difference. Haiku nazis are a bore-snore.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Aha! If you refer to my comment just before this one, this is EXACTLY wot I was talking about with linking two of the action lines into one. To me, this is a decently written haiku, whether 'graded' in the classic, objective sense, or as an American-style objective haiku. Good job, Craig. My taste is that the juxt shouldn't be too wide so as not to lose the reader within the gap(like some of the haiku-nazis on PS push for). Your juxt is wide enough and relates to the initial imagery.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:45:00 AM
    And lovely picture. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:54:00 PM
    Congratulations Craig....

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:49:00 PM
    Craig, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Nice image! Congrats, Craig.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on your achievement, Craig. Very colourful!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:18:00 PM
    What a nice image, Craig. Congratulations! Ray

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:25:00 PM
    nice imagery Craig...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:29:00 PM
    Craig love this image. Congrats on your great win. Connie

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:07:00 AM
    Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Craig! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:34:00 AM
    Many congratulations Craig , very visual xx

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 7:12:00 PM
    Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 6:02:00 PM
    Delightful little haiku here. Quite an honor to be placed next to such an experienced poet. My congratulations on your win. And no, I don't say that to everyone.

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Lovely, and very of the moment-- I see the cherry petals reflecting in the pond. Very nice, Craig.

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 8:40:00 PM
    loving this image!!! :)

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 12:05:00 AM
    Hmm i can smell the perfume....Seren

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:41:00 PM
    I see it pretty...Craig...