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Dew Drops

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© G. V., 11-18-2012, All Rights Reserved
(Two triolet poems in one, with altered the fourth line)

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Dew Drops

Exceeded is the field's display
where sky sheds winter's first cold drops, 
the lyre of winds in bogs will play
nocturnal dance and moon's ballet, 
on shelter sheds will ring sky drops,
the silence speaks - her voice atop, 
the blooms in mists salute and sway, 
tis where she felt her tears' dew drops.

Commendable the feast expands
in time the dancers reach the fair, 
rain drops will fall on greenest grass, 
musicians' violins and trumps, 
her siren's voice responds with flair
night solitude's bird singers stare
in mists salute the clouds that pass, 
as rain drops dew her face and flare.

© 11/18/2012, G.V. All rights reserved

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  1. Date: 1/27/2014 7:32:00 AM
    Musical dew drops with lyre, violins, voices and dances. Lovely ...

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 7:35:00 AM
    Beautiful Giorgio!

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 3:28:00 PM
    You meter is so perfect and the story and beauty you mingle is breathtaking. Always find so much here. Thankyou. SuZ

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Once choose extraordinary dialogue, and difficult forms....above and beyond the average souper! I'm in awe!

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 11:37:00 AM
    WOW, Georgio! This is a stunning poem. The language you use to develop such fantastic imagery is just wonderful! 7+!

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 11:08:00 AM
    incredible the way you capture a woman's feelings in this sensitive poem a master's pen Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Russell; this is beautiful. I love dew drops and rain drops. someone send me some pictures of rain drops and dew drops taken with a special camara. they looked beautiful - like jewels. Thanks for sharing and liking my poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 2:40:00 PM
    vintage in my mind. G., ;-) i love the smooth and calmness, as dew drops on the face... nice verse..Linda

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 4:29:00 PM
    very pretty. SandyIvy

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:35:00 PM
    - Just need one word: Beautiful! / / Anne-Lise :)