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Day One

Day one - our first breath,
our first cloudy stare;
a mind so new in a strange world;
a mind confused and afraid.
We know not yet
what confused and afraid mean,
but we know how it feels.
Then, to a mother's breast
we find peace.

Last day - our last breath,
our last cloudy stare;
a mind so old in a strange world;
a mind confused and afraid.
We've forgotten
what confused and afraid mean,
but we know how it feels.
Then, to a child's breast
we find peace...

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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 4:57:00 PM
    Hello Craig, double soup mail... wait triple.... PD

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:36:00 AM
    The first day and the last day stanzas are both very impressive and perfect! Big hearty congratulations on your great win my dear friend, Craig! Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Beautiful Craig....congratulations.....

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:23:00 PM
    this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:28:00 PM
    , thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:05:00 PM
    Hi Craig: The circle of life perfectly described. Should be a winner. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:54:00 PM
    Craig, this is beautiful and really gripped me. I have no idea what contest this is for but I hope it places way up there. SO good and I loved how it reverbs. Faving this. Hope you are well. Hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Beautiful piece enjoyed a lot. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 5:37:00 PM
    craig, you are a magician of words. Your poem speaks volumes brilliantly :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 3:21:00 AM
    Great poem.. good chance of a winning place in competition. How many competitions do you enter? I find some of them quite specific and far too complicated. I was shocked getting places for 2 of the ones I did enter, as I took chances with the requirements !! Anyway... where do you find the time to write? Good question for us all I guess. I think my next poem title is going to be "Obsessive Compulsive Poet"

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:07:00 PM
    what a touching poem, Craig. You are such a reflective poet.

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 2:00:00 PM
    This gave me chills......the reality of it is too true, but accepting the cycle and nature's circle of life, is the answer to finding peace of mind. Excellent use of this contest theme! Well done, Craig!