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Dark Victory

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Below is the poem entitled Dark Victory which was written by poet Carrie Richards. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Dark Victory

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       Missile’s docked, more weapons stock-piled
       ensuing conflict in our view
       We cross into some equinox, 
       to save our world or blow in two? 



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  1. Date: 3/19/2012 6:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Chastushka" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 10:47:00 PM
    Very nicely done!! Congrats Carrie on your big win in this this tough challenge, huggs

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 9:31:00 AM
    I think Gwendolen meant closer to the truth. Perfect write for this interesting form!!

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 8:40:00 AM
    This is very nice Carrie.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 8:10:00 PM
    congrats Carrie on an awesome win for these splendid words.. powerful thoughts..

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 7:52:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Carrie! It seems everyone is watching the Middle East and now N. Korea once again, too. Peace may never be within our reach. Sad but true. Well-written. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 4:42:00 PM
    There couldn't be anything further from the truth than this chastushka, Carrie!...With all eyes on Israel and the U.S., the world lies in wait on a peaceful Iranian outcome. Sadly, there may not be a peaceful proposition. Congrats on this wonderful action-packed entry! Great title too! Andrea liked it as well. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 1:45:00 PM
    Carrie congrats on your win, lets hope not..David

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 10:24:00 AM
    Not sure the word [with] is STRESSED remember Andie said Trochie starts with a STRESSED word [it maybe fine] BUt I would be sure [MISsiles DOCKED and WEAPons STOCKED..is trochaic] Carrie for some reason my spirits are very up this morning, perhaps because I had sight-singing class and some of it is actually starting to make sense. Dinner & a show tonight with my Sis for her birthday too! [No news yet on the test] Thanks for your flattering commnets! Light & Love

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 2/11/2012 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    if you need the syllable maybe you can stick [with] on the end of that line?
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 7:55:00 PM
    Excellent as always, Carrie! Best of luck in the contest...this is so relevant, it's scary. Much love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 4:25:00 PM
    Fantastic portrait of what silly things we do in the name of security. MADness. Well written and poignant, thanks for hsaring and best of luck in the contest Mrs. Carrie.

    B Avatar Tim B
    Date: 2/10/2012 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *sharing
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 3:30:00 PM
    Smile ˜ This world was in essence destroyed long long ago; actually ˜ There's only one way out and I happen to know my dear sweeet precious Carrie Richards * Smile, stay precious and keep the faith ˜ Love, John!:) *

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 2:45:00 PM
    Briliantly written dear Carrie.,you`re fantastic with words:) Take Care,Arild