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A Top made of a Coconut Tree Leaf

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A Top made of a Coconut Tree Leaf

A weaving magic on a green coconut tree leaf  ;
The leaf top rotates on the childhood rod fast.
No canker, the child runs with the top of green leaf,
Which, making the rustic road dizzy, spins fast.
Moss of disgust never gathers on the spinning top;
The drooping boredom spins away, as the child runs
With the top.It withers and gets slow under hot rays.
It did spin clockwise: one wishes anti-clockwise.


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  1. Date: 12/16/2011 9:25:00 AM
    Congratulation my friend on your win and wish you and all yours 'Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 4:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning entry Jon

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 8:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Fabiyas

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 5:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 4:04:00 AM
    Congratulations and happy forthcoming holidays x

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:25:00 AM
    A Top Made of Coconut Tree Leaf [Keep all your titling consistant even if you don't use the normal formate][Weaving magic on a green coconut tree leaf ..the placement of the adjective is different in english]

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    Date: 11/11/2011 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debbie.I used the adjectives in disorder as in many British English poems.Now I have changed line 1 and 3.
  1. Date: 2/6/2011 5:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a very well written rispetto

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 2:42:00 AM
    This is a very unique read, Fabiyas-- enjoyed reading this coconut leaf poem and I see you won with it-- very deserving :) congrats! -nikko :)

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 8:34:00 PM
    Wow. What an incredible poem. I love every word. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Well deserved. Best wishes. Deb

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 4:54:00 AM
    Congratulations Fabiyas, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 10:46:00 PM
    Very orginal rispetto, Fabiyas. Congratulations in this contest. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 4:52:00 PM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry my friend... superb as always.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 4:16:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 2:28:00 PM
    Hello Fabiyas, Congratulations on your win, this is so well done. I love it. As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 12:22:00 PM
    Hey Fabiyas, Congratulations on your 6th Place win in Dr. Ram's Contest with this lovely poem! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 11:15:00 AM
    How I love the line "Drooping boredom spins away, as child runs with top." Excellent poem, Fabiyas. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 11:09:00 AM
    Congratrulations Fabiyas on your #6 win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 10:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on the well deserved win in my contest, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 10:20:00 AM
    Stunning imagery Fabiyas, all the best for Dr. Ram's contest with this visual gem ;)

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 9:40:00 AM
    Very nice descriptive write, Fabiyas. If the wind had been spining "anti-clockwise," it might have been a hurricane. Best wishes for success in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn