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Below is the poem entitled WOMAN, I BE which was written by poet Cyndi MacMillan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I am woman
when I reel in a three pound trout 
on a lazy July afternoon,
North lake waters ablaze,
skin freckling as dragonflies 
                hover and heckle

I am woman
When I dance to a reel
at a Caleigh in Cape Breton,
six, red bangles on my wrists,
wild tunes enticing me towards
strong arms

My hands stroke a fevered
my touch almost, but not quite, 
softer than her breath
or these hands can wield a hammer,
as they did when I rebuilt 
our old, back deck,
lifting lumber and laying planks
with aptitude and confidence

My femininity sweats
Regularly at the gym
As I pump iron
or chase new goals

Today I may bake bread

but not long ago I made my bread
by helping to run a small office,
organizing and managing,
coddling customers
who understood my worth

If I never bore a child,
chose a different path,
woman, I would still be
nurturing other dreams

Preteen, I'd dreamed 
of a nunnery,
serving the Highest
with prayer and service

Instead, I wed
letting hips unman my man,
his lips laying new roads
while calling my name

Within my wardrobe 
silk and satin hang, ever ready,
and my dresser houses
tees, hockey shirts, jeans...
somehow they all get along just fine

Fondly, I recall
watching football with my father
our winter days skiing,
arguments about Trudeau,
those Liberal days

Should I end up bald from chemo
like so many Amazons
before me,
long scars replacing breasts
or dark sutures stealing
I will continue to be 
eternal yet inconsistent,
loving persistently,
at one with all man-kind
surprising even myself
questing for life's true meaning
but always refusing 
             to be fully defined

Form: Free Verse
Category: Woman, introspection

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  1. Date: 1/6/2014 1:41:00 PM
    Cyndi, Cyndi, Cyndi Only defined by Inspiration! 2x Faves 3 Blow me aways and all the stars heaven allows!! In admiration, chuck

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 11:22:00 AM
    Wow! Glad that the "strike" is over, Cyndi. You're such a great poet. A work of art; I read it three times and I'm in love with the 1st, 5th (line stanza),6th, 9th, and 12th stanzas. It's going to my Fav!

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 8:00:00 PM
    Just me, but you are the most talented writer!!! You continue to amaze me------young lady you go to your room and write more great stuff and stop tempting TPS to kick your intimidating butt out of here!!

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    Date: 1/5/2014 8:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 8:31:00 PM
    You my lady are a cut above the rest, xxx