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Winter Blues

Old winter's bite has bruised my cheek
like parchment my thin skin crackles.  
Indoors I hide, my bones creak,
my fragile form in cold shackles. 
Unwanted guest please desist, oh leave,
return the warmth of sunny skies
and springtime's gentle flowery weave.
Be gone, go, this aged maiden cries.
For I've no use for your howling,
your ice lakes or snowy trees;
there's no sense in all your growling
jail key's which rattle don't appease. 
So, leave me now, go softly, go
silently, sweetly, take the snow.

Date: 1/26/13

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:39:00 AM
    Congrats on the well deserved win of your poem in the Contest of Francine Roberts. Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:36:00 PM
    great write...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Congratulations Debbie! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 8:56:00 AM
    Brrrrr, congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 8:48:00 AM
    I can always count on you not taking the easy route........I applaud that you try all the forms....and succeed at making them into beautiful, meaningful poem. Another here that should be number 1 !! Kuddos!!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Oh dear you sound so fragile at the start here. I hope you don''t feel like that. Well done on your winning spot xx

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Really enjoyed this one..congrats Deb..BG

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:56:00 AM
    I had never heard of this form before. Very interesting. Congratulations Debbie. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:38:00 AM
    Congratulations!!! Highness!!!:) well done on this and all your wins !!! Love you bunches,'Scarlet' lol'

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:13:00 PM
    congratulations on your winning write..

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:08:00 PM
    Debbie , many congrats on your winning entry

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:56:00 PM
    Debbie, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:41:00 AM
    yes, take the snow and all these chilly temperatures. Wonderful poem, Deb. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 5:29:00 AM
    Wonderful poem Debbie, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 3:16:00 AM
    An excellent poem Deb done in impressive style!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 10:03:00 PM
    Oh I love this Debbie, going to my favorites. thank you for reading Shattered Dreaming" been single 5 years now, Was with him for 17 years" Your hybronnet is awesome though ;}

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 6:30:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your lovely poem, Debbie! Fantastic visuals and smooth flow. I haven't heard of this form. I'll have to check it out. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:16:00 PM
    Very descriptive and beautiful. Haven't been out from in front of my wood stove in thee weeks either. Till warmer lots of smiles!